Remarkably interesting. The novel was light at first but it keeps on progressing into more exciting events. Just keep an eye on the punctuations. Even if you're not a native speaker of the English language, you did a great job.
Writing Quality - Translation quality noticeably worsened after ch 37 for some reason. So many commas are used in. place of periods. Terminology could also be betterStory Development - Seems standard so far. It seems to be heading into the parents are actually op with hidden background trope. Pacing is decent I guess.Character Design - MC is a logical person, treats demons realistically instead of just using the power of friendship. There's still no arrogant young master yet so that is a plus. Trash mobs are still present though.Updating Stability - We will see when and if it gets picked.World Background - Power system will probably be confusing to most. There is 3 seperate systems along with the bloodline: level, class, and grade in increasing importance and difficulty to improve. The geography and state of affairs has not been mentioned also, but it is still 60 chapters so it can be forgiven i guess.
I actually find this novel very enjoyable, I don't get why it gets so much hate, at least the idea is original enough unlike most of the copy-paste novels around here. Unfortunatelly I don't think it will get selected this way... The novel is about a man who was kidnapped and is forced to live on a pillar at 1000 m altitude with just his bed. He must resist hunger, thrist, the changeable and extreme weather conditions and more. I really liked these parts, they are realistic. One day he seems like someone came to save him and brought him to an island, but there some creepy secrets await him... and not to spoil too much, he is forced to be an actor in different movies, and starts from the bottom asa an extra as all the newbies (yes, there are others like him). He must obey the orders of the director during these movies like anybody else and must not die during the filming. He can't oppose the director's will also or give up on the movie or the penalty is.. well, you'll see what the penalty is. The only downside is that the MC has some enemies from his past that seek revenge and they always target him during the filming so that he will be the one who dies and needs to bear the penalty. But of course he is the MC and is lucky (but also very clever) and finds way to turn around the situation. That's why I find this enjoyable, the premise is somewhat unique, the MC is clever and likeable for me, it is also similar to the Terror Infinity genre only that the movie scenes are original, even if it was hinted that some movies to come can be something like Avengers. Also, at the end of each filming, he must return to the top of the pillar, so he must endure all the pain again.. only that there is a way to make things better, you'll see. Man, I really hope this can be picked up but I won't get my hopes up.
Overall it’s great ? and I have the same name as mc and we’re similar so ? awesome now to fill u character count. Hey I just got home I left the car in my suitcase I wanna is a time for you bruh is that a good day to come home to get my kids and get a little help
In my first review I said that the only bad thing is the grammar.Guess what! Grammar is improving and if there are errors it’s almost unnoticeable. Still the book itself, the writing style and the characters didn’t lack anything. 5/5 would most definitely recommend. Great book don!
The story line is well thought out. The pace is good with no major leaps or large times wasted in single thing. Character development is going nicely, and no major contradictions with events or peoples action.However, some of the writing of “That spell”, “Use that”, and such is annoying. Its fine once or twice but everytime is too much. Specially since the next sentence it is named said soell. I know the author is trying for suspense, but here it is better to just use the name or such. For example, instand of saying “use that”, it would go better to say “use water guard” or “ use your new spell.”
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strong female lead, wolves, sexy, !!!!! i suggest for everyone to read it. it's nice but we need more chapters . i really like it. update more. :)