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the book is currently little slow but overall consept is awesome you should know I am also want to become writer in future it will be without
It is very unique and refreshing with a MC that remembers all the dense/clueless/soft/simple MCs of past stories and learns from them. Not just I read xyz so I know what I am doing, then does the dumbest things in every situation.The interaction with the Niece and Sister are my favorite as they are very realistic and the banter between Huang and Anjing is great.The only thing for me is some times the explanation during a scene gets long as there are sometimes 3-4 different explanations for the same thing or explains then explains the explanation. But this is easy to skip over when seen. Over all liking it a lot just starting ch 43.
Very VERY good book there mate. Like seriously this book has amazing development and I'm hooked. As a fellow realistic fiction author I'm enjoying every bit of it. Felix is an interesting character and Marrow is best girl, when she's off the alcohol of course XD.
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I am hooked. The main character is interesting. I like how the author explores what the MC is about. The world building is cool, I want to know more about the world and explore it through the MC's eyes. Was impressed with the progression, the pacing is done well. Fun characters. I like it :) Looking forward to more. Note to any new readers: the grammar is a little shaky at times , but you can still easily comprehend what is being said.
Dont read here and spend your money on this book. You are just being ripped off by this disgusting translator. Take note, the current latest chapter of this novel is Chapter 208, that is in premium. I have checked the raws and chapter 208 is different. In the raws, what is shown in chapter 208 is in chapter 135. You are not getting your money's worth for the chapter purhases. This is blatant riff off.
couldn't read the first chapter he wanted to borrow from his friend but sure to economy he didn't want to accept help from his friend like????
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Can this be released already? It's now the top 4 oldest novels in the trial read while newer novels are being picked, what determines when they'll be released?
I read it to chapter 300 and I have to say, I misjudged it at first. even though it resembles that trash simulation novel "I will transmigrate in 10 days but I possess a simulator" or something like that, it's not bad like that one. it uses those elements properly to make an enjoyable novel . It's quite entertaining if you like the concept and MC makes use of his meta knowledge to some degree. MC picks up women left and right and some of them are left out of screen for some long time too but they aren't forgotten like the other Chinese novels, they're mentioned often and we even see their perspective sometimes in the middle. imo this one does the big harem route properly and makes it fun. I read the mtl and I have to warn you, don't fall down the rabbit hole of mtl but for those who really want it, I read it in readwn . com with this same name
Lord of Mysteries fic? I don't even care if it's good or not, you get 5 stars.FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
The concept in which the novel is revolving around is good. But its good to improve on your Writing as character development and dialogues are getting butchered in between. hope you do well.
