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I like this type of novel, like IRAS, i hope you continue doing it, do not stop updating the novel plz, good luck author. .......................
btw theres a guy posting the same thing on the site..... just wanted to say..................................................................
It's my first time to read a story about sexpotion...but the author is good and creative in there own way... I like how the scenes were made..
I just have to cast dispell and this mc is f*cked...........................................................................................
Read this novel years ago on royal road. Hope you update this as it was great but does need to be proof read. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXD
well compared to most trail novels this quite good but it doesn't deserve the hype readers are spreading just because it's from tlm's writer it's a copy of fantasy simulator so i would compare it with that only(compared general novels it's still quite good)it's subpar compared to fantasy simulator it's more of watered down version of fantasy simulator as the Original work had many points which made more engaging which this lacks most importantly it was imeressive while astral apostle isn't as Astral apostle make it feel like mc is in VRrpg rather than a real world far away
I love the novel not because it was game/life kind of reality but the way the story is presented to the mind of we the readers . For me, I will say that the author did his work very well and now we're enjoying the it . Still waiting for more chapters ? . Shadow!!!
my i ask if this novel (NTR) or not?,i'm confused.there are some that say it's (NTR) and some not so author please say if it is or not.[forgive me for my English it's not my mother language]
Bring Back Ancient Fiend Dragon EmperorIt's a generic-styled story but it's probably one of the best of its kind.Even with its fair share of cliches
I don't know what the hype is about this novel, it's no where nearly as good as others, I guess it's because it's very mainstream people really like it. If you are looking for something innovative and exciting then don't read this, because it's not it's the same old novel like all other....mc gets powers and smashes everyone....nothing interesting at all, you can predict the end at the start.
The story line is good and the plot is well developed but the author needs to work on the grammar as it makes it difficult to understand some parts of the story.
~~~~~READ BUT BEWARE OF~~~~~Nice novel so far ( around chapter 45 ) but i see a pattern at the moment from chapter 30 to 45ish is basically the same chapter just in another order.1. Mc is streaming2. 20ish comments from people watching stream3. Mc walks 500 miles at evening or morning4. 1 or 2 sidecharacter background info sentences5. 1 or 2 story progress sentencesThis novel is written in a great way but will be a pain to your stone collection later on.At the moment i dont see myself reading it when it gets premium and i need to "pay" 12 stones for one chapter were basically is no content but some random "comments" from some none important people of the imaginery stream.
