The characters don’t fully act in accordance to their age. And as a result can be a little annoying and pulls me out of the immersion. This is really the biggest reasons I drop novels beside edge lords. Nothing horrible about the book nothing to amazing. It’s just alright for me but could be someone else’s cup of tea.
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I liked the way you portrayed the teacher. He reminded me of one of mine. The student was so ready to correct the teacher to show their intelligence. I liked that also . I like how you peaked my interest in the introduction by telling a story that you can’t find on the net.
I highly recommend it, it entered my top 10, both the character and the story are very engaging.this story has a lot of future!!!Looking forward to more chapters and see how the MC's revenge goes.
honestly, I think this would've been a lot better without the system.
When are you goin going to continue or make something new?
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Just started reading and I have to say I was hesitant because the review saying this is yaoi however I found out that this is a great story that got shot by a fucking retard spreading wrong reviews for fun, **** this is a freaking gem that won't get translated because of that bastard
Really good novelHas lot of Potential ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
A good read and a very likeable Mc. Since the author is new it makes it even more interesting. Please continue with more chapters as I am really liking it so far.
Y HAVE U NOT COME BACK YET?? I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR U TO COME BACK AND KEEP WRITING!! IF UR NOT COMING BACK THEN Y WOULD U START A BOOK AND THEN STOP IT WHEN ITS GOOD OR PEOPLE START TO LIKE IT!!???
finally my kind of novel is here. bloody good show mates. bloody. good. show. now gotta wait for this to be picked so I can read more than just 60 chaps