Female Female Male, so basically threesome between two woman and a man... The opposite is MMF, two man and a woman... Ur welcome
Bru Stop this Princess cringe say at keast Prince. I hate it when Mcs are called Female names its over the top cringe and for this ant the fact that you locked the chapter WAYYYYY to early a solid 1 star review.
Am ch 20
Good start, albeit some little mistake here and there, it is totally normal for a new writer! The world building is really interesting and it has a lot of potential! Would totally recommend
The switch between Enola and Sandra definitely made them realise what they previously had compare to what they got themself into now, as the author said in her book titled "I will make up for my mistakes" that "we all agree to the fact that we truly understand the value of a person when we lost them and all we want is a second chance to makeup for our mistakes." loved the story, plot and the characters! Brilliant job done as always by the author!
Best novel ive read come from trial reads in a bit. Lately the translation quality has been so bad I can’t even finish most 40 chapters. The MC makes smart choices and isnt just bek g trash woth a system. i really hope this gets chosen
I don't really hate this story, but let's be honest. The writing is at the level of a 12-year-old kid who decided to write a story of his own. In fact, I bet that many 12-year-olds would do a better job. The beginning and the premise are completely copied from a Korean novel with a similar name. The main character is one-dimensional while the side characters are ZERO-dimensional. This story and system are so simple that even someone with a 70 IQ would understand it easily. There are plot holes starting from the first chapter. There the MC said something like "I hope that I'll awaken a useful ability"... But in fact, in this world, there are no abilities to awaken, lol. If you aren't facepalming at most of his decisions then let me congratulate you - you've passed this IQ test with 80 points! Yay! So why is this popular? I think that this story, Vampire System, and Cultivation Online show you what you need to succeed at Webnovel. Op protagonist, a fast pace so that he could show off how OP he is, fast release rate so that people could get addicted to your story. That's it. Other people waste their words by trying to write a story that makes sense, the only one who managed to get to the top with such an approach is the author of Supreme Magus.
Pretty meh. It was cool at first, but it became long winded. The first bank robbery scene lasts basically 15 chapters or so. Way too long imo. I got bored when nothing was happening. They just kept exaggerating how ferocious he looked or whatever. Boring
This is pretty funny. No one believes he's rich, and his wife is totally clueless! (at least as of ch.15) Looking forward to seeing the fallout when she realizes the truth...
Overall, I love it. Writing quality is awesome. The storyline you can get a clique vibe for the first time but just know that this is an original work.Characters? Why, I don't want to spoil it to you. Just read em.I've read a couple of system novel so... I don't know much but at least the system is actually driving the plot.To the author, don't stop writing, story must be told!
I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting ?I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺
THIS IS THE MOST UNDERRATED BOOK I'VE EVER SEEN. I'ts story's plot is out of ordinary. I didn't know that baby supremacy is super cool. Super lovable I do not lost interest after many of chapters I've past as all of the chapters has its own thrill.
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