This is written badly. I can't say for sure why. It is normal English, it is not a bad translation like many others, it is just written in a way that I am bored and I am not interested in reading it.It might be that the protagonist is too much interested in girls.It is kinda like this:1. SituationHe is sitting somewhere and googling a girl and the author goes on and on about woman.2. SituationA man is dying, the protagonist is paying attention to the body of the female doctor.3. SituationIt will be decided if he has any chance to attend a certain university which is very very very important to him. All his time before was about trying to get into this university.He is not able to look at the woman who is sitting nearby.But he describes each button on her clothes and speculates about the size of her boobs.I just stopped reading here. It was enough.The author of this story is probably 12 years old and not able to talk to girls without thinking about ***. Ever.