I like the story so far. Story development is good.
Keep updating
Hello. I have already read 100 chapters of the book and although compared to the whole book it is few, but I still feel that after so many chapters an opinion is formed in the person. In my opinion, this book is terrible. I am unable to grasp the main character's way of thinking and the logic behind his actions. Sometimes he acts like he's the strongest here when he's just a weak kid who can easily be killed by almost any monster. The incomprehensible way of thinking that random takes pity on a few people for no reason and just casually shows his secrets as if what he is doing is completely normal, and when random picks up the bag in the wild because it looks cute... Well, that's not why he knows and whether he will just play dumb and trick them into robbing the group or not. Such a thought would never cross his mind, but he feels that he is capable of controlling thousands of lives in a city. Interesting I must say. And the personality of this great savior is terrible. I honestly don't understand what logic he uses to save all the people in the world. Pure stupid. When the development of the character starts, it suddenly stops, as if the author has forgotten, and even regresses to where it was. Although the way of thinking in the first chapter is as stupid as in the last. Overall, the story is not bad, but the stupid main character completely spoils the story. I'm sorry, but it could have been a good work.
An interesting world where people have inborn traits that open up durning puberty rather x menish as the abilitys are limited in Scope but can grow.
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Hey guys, the author here giving five stars to himself because he is dumb. Sigh, anyway, this is the second book I know I will definitely continue and not ghost it like my other two so look forward to it. It is pretty wholesome and I would really appreciate it if you give me your thoughts about it. Thanks.
The title... it just speaks to me.
this novel is good i actually read this on other site yesterday and its on ? hope to see more character improvement and improve the world background a little that's all thanks.
average writing quality, average storytelling and just barely average translation quality. And for me the problem isn't related to that there are other novels with similar storylines, there are only so many stories that can be told and if someone does it better than I have no problems whatsoever that I have already read a similar story. And that is where the problem is with this story, I have read a similar story that was written much better. The storytelling was much better, there is a natural progression in strength increase and not sudden hikes, and things happen for a good reason. Characters are written well and they have good motives for their actions. All things that I have not found in this novel. And I haven't even spoken about the dodgy translations where I'm constantly thinking 'no the author couldn't have meant this? or could he?' (P.S. in my star evaluation I have filled in the updating stability as if it was translation quality)
hmmm... kinda plain if i were to compare it to debut or die. there is nothing in particular that excites me. the story has a very serious intonation, and there is little to no conflict. if i were to summarise the first 30 ch, it'd be "he woke up from coma, went to an audition, got rejected but......" exactly that, but with many more sentences in between. in debut or die, there are paragraphs that you just simply cannot forget, like sometimes you'd feel like reading that particular part again. this one doesn't have that charm.
please reconsider your decision...your story is good , please continue post the New update story
The story was quite good I like how he picked up his life...there is so much to learn in this story. it's a must-read.l like the Leon character a lot.keep it up, dear.....