I was drawn by the start of this book, it was a lovely start. Just the book cover alone was enticing. Keep up the good work Author, the storyline is amazing.
Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences.
Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say.
Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good.
Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good.
World Background is great so no complaints there.
What can I say? I'm just a fan of what this author writes!
KEEP ON WRITING, COMRADE!
140 character count kills me
Maybe I should just write BS?
This will probably be my first and last review on this platform unless I can find another novel that hits just as hard.
Thanks for writing this masterpiece.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Interesting idea, I like how the world is shaping up. If you start posting daily with good grammar then this could be popular. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
waiting for next chapter.keep updating and make story line up perfect.
amazing chapters and story wanna know what's coming next
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This is the story of a demon who undergoes a transformation from being a gentle and kind person to becoming a cold and indifferent man. Tom starts out on "Earth" and then merges with his AI and starts his journey in the world of fantasy.
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I remove everything bad I said about the webnovel, finally this masterpiece is back
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Keep in mind that I just gave up at around chapter 40.
I will try to explain my ratings
I am ok with the different buildings as long as there is a comparison. And I am sure alot are alright with it. I usually just dismiss those as fantasy buildings when the info dumps comes in and finally, since I am a filipino, am alright once there are no info dumps.
The reason as to why I rated it 4 is the over explaining things. Like memory and even a katana; the katana was even described with different words, 5 of them in fact.
The info dumps are too much. It is nice to have info dumps but there is just too many. In the whole 40 chapters, it felt like more than half of those chapters are info dumps, unnecessary infodumps even.
The main character is fine up until his attitude turned 180. The character is good and is not provoked easily, later on he saved a group of people then after that he found another group of people. Those guys just warned him not to go there, there was no reason for conflict but then the main character fights the group cause he didn't like what he said