I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?
E venido de algunos videos en donde estan usando tu historia pero aun haci estuvo buena la trama espero la parte 2 y quiero la venganza no voy a dormir hasta ver la parte dos ruego la parte 2 quiero la parte 2 ???
Amazing story line and writing, the character development is phenomenal, the worlds are described perfectly and the idea of the whole book is so creative,
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I like the novel so far and I hope it continues! so here’s a thumbs up ?
MARVELOUS!!!IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR SOMETHING THAT WILL GIVE YOU A HUGE AMOUNT OF ENTERTAINMENT THEN THIS NOVEL IS FOR YOUeverything is greati have never seen anything that is underrated this muchbetter than many top 10 novels i started reading it when someone wrote a comment on Blood warlock that "armipotent is better than it" such a Great price of work.
"I want to rest Mom."
"So, after the Shinobi world war turned out ...." I just close my ears to hear this long blah-blah-blah.
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Nurseman ... Akh c'mon, we need to rename it right now! How about ... Nurseperson? Yeah it's sound better.
"Wait let me guess," said Writerz.
Shancai:"I'm sorry about-"