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So I REALLY like this novel, at first it reminded me of solo leveling, not in a bad way but just how Alex got his powers. I like the way the author makes the characters still seem human and vulnerable in the way that he doesnt make them seem too OP just cause they are awakened. ThE only thing i dont like is that the author doesnt update consistentl….hope that it doesnt stay that way
What is a Blue Eyes White Dragon doing there? Don’t tell me this is some sort of fan-fiction about a crossover between Yugioh and Pokemon.Other than that, he has already peaked at 9,999? Pathetic.
I am shocked that this novel is so highly rated despite the serious inconsistencies. In the first chapter, it is explicitly stated “Both Garen and his sister were born with dark purple hair and eyes the color of wine. Their hair color was passed down from their father and eye color from their mother”. But out of nowhere in chapter 10, they become step siblings who don’t share a drop of blood. I imagine that the author’s world defies the notion of heredity. This stood out since it’s right at the beginning of the novel. There are many more if readers pay attention that just takes away the joy of reading.
Thank you for doing what you do. I really like the story and now I can read it without getting a brain aneurysm :)And 140 characters, everyone knows the drill......
The Grammar is not very good for a translated novel but other than that the story is actually quite promising and even though u may not understand what happens at the start it will get clearer at around 10 chapters.
I greatly enjoyed this book so far. It is different from the usual Cultivation novels and overused plot lines. Good to see something new and interesting.
Writing quality: Good! Little to no error.Good sentencing and paragraphing. Translator also explain the chinese reference.Story development: The premises is good but the delivery and execution is bad. Mc lack braincells sometimes...Character design: They're only so so. Like I said above, mc sometimes lack braincells. I hate the part even knowing that the hoe in the wh*re houe is using him and stuff, he still want to go there. There are some similar things but yeah....World background: Not bad, the premises like I said is interesting, not new but still rare. They're in a murim and a cultivation world together.Overall: I don't recommend investing yo ressources in this but if you want a quick read, sure go for it. It coulda been so much better if a lil bit more effort had gone into it but it is what it is
Awesome & Funny Story. Hope for more faster updates. The MC’s mental commentary is awesome. He goes against the typical story where hero gets pissed & goes on a killing spree where there is no need to. His focus is for his students to be strategic & cool headed.
Ótima história bastante aventura agradável enredo sem interrupções fácil leitura de uma oportunidade vamos nos.divertir lendo essa maravilhosa história. ✌️?
Writing Quality five starStability of Updates five starStory Development five starCharacter Design five starWorld Background five star........
Not worth the time. Really inventive tho. Instead of a system that brings games to reality it is a system that brings games to fantasy. Up until C25 tho there is only that.People gaming and nerding it out. Too damn boring.