>Girl falls in love
> Erthe: 'Goodbye'
Every stacking session for this only amounts to ten chapters or so. Shame.
thanks a lot for your work. I liked it very much.с thanks a lot for your work. I really liked it and look forward to continuing
there is a dense protagonist tag so it's most likely harem where he doesn't even know/acknowledge that all the main girls around him are in love with him
Do whatever suits you best. There are some slight changes but nothing that actually matters. For example early on there's a scene where mc bites his instructors hair in a fight which never happens in the manhwa but it doesn't actually affect anything its just forgotten a few chapters later
Spoiler: The novel is reasonably well-written. The plot is coherent and generally well-developed. It's enjoyable to see an overarching narrative unfold as the chapters progress.
Cons:
- The author tends to exaggerate the positive attributes of the main character. Expect most male characters to fall in love with her at first sight.
- Expect everything the main character does to be perfect, and almost every female character to envy her beauty, among other clichés.
- The chapters are very short.
General Comments:
- There will be some tragic elements within the novel, which sometimes feel like the author has run out of ideas and resorts to dismantling the current plot setup.
- The antagonists will linger—expect to despise them, and they won’t be easily eliminated.
As of chapter 1900+, we are in the middle of the second (or possibly third) arc, and the story continues to develop.
There's a book I'd highly recommend, despite its harem theme. It focuses less on romantic relationships and more on female characters who develop feelings for the protagonist due to his guidance and support. They become reliant on him, fearing abandonment because of their past experiences. The main character garners affection from almost everyone, even from those who initially dislike him, which is quite remarkable. Reading this novel can make you question your own determination to stick to your principles – it's inspiring and makes you want to take action towards achieving your goals.
On a scale of 1 to 5:
Action: 3 - The main character (MC) and even their companions exhibit overpowered traits. It's quite intense.
Adventure: 3 - The 'adventures' are more like casual sightseeing, lacking substantial danger or excitement.
Comedy: 3 - Humor is present, mainly derived from the MC's lack of common sense in奇幻世界的某些 situations, such as cooking in a dungeon while others fight with high-tech gear.
Ecchi: 2 - The sexual content is mild, akin to something one might find in an elementary school-level manga. Lovers of lolis might rate it higher.
Fantasy: 5 - The setting includes elements like dragons, unicorns, elves, and dwarves, making it a rich and immersive fantasy world.
Harem: 3 - The MC's harem is growing numerically but losing distinctiveness, as individual characters become less defined.
Slice of Life: 5 - The series leans heavily into a cooking-focused slice-of-life genre at times, offering a relaxing aspect.
Giving the story a 4 for the engaging translation and interesting plot, despite some drawbacks.
It was far from enjoyable. Firstly, I found the main character's desire to maintain a low profile to conceal his extraordinary abilities frustrating, as he allowed people to suffer or even die because he was afraid of revealing his true strength. Despite having immense powers and advantages, he struggled to defeat a level 41 opponent when he himself was at level 310. Honestly, I lost interest and decided to drop the story.
It seems like you've written a detailed review of a BL (Boy's Love) novel, sharing your honest thoughts and opinions about the main characters and their actions. You express disappointment with the protagonist Feng Ming's behavior, describing him as overly self-centered and seeking constant praise. You also address the mixed reactions to the antagonist, Rong Tian, who is portrayed as abusive and has a positive ending despite his heinous act.
You emphasize that mentioning sexual assault in literature is important to raise awareness, but in this case, you argue that Rong Tian's character does not receive adequate consequences for his actions. You criticize the reviewer who downplays the significance of An He's death and the impact it had on the story, stating that it's crucial to acknowledge the severity of the abuse.
Regarding the book's rating, you give it a low score based on the plot, side characters, and world-building, despite acknowledging the genre's appeal. You also mention a specific guard character, Rong Hu, who you hold responsible for not helping An He during the assaults.
In conclusion, you stand by your honest review, understanding that everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but you believe it's important to address issues that may bother readers, even if it means not universally pleasing everyone. You end on a lighthearted note, signing off with a friendly reminder to have a nice day.
Revised version:
You know I tend to write reviews for almost every BL book, but I often question why I don't come across books with high ratings. Anyway, let's delve into this one. Honestly, Feng Ming, our main character, comes across as knowledgeable but not wise. His childlike behavior and constant need for praise grated on me – he'd whine when not praised, like a show-off in middle school. It's fine to want recognition, but it doesn't make him likable.
As for Rong Tian, the ML, the 5-star reviews seem to avoid discussing his problematic actions. He sexually assaulted An He, which is a serious issue. While acknowledging that it's essential to address such topics, it's concerning how Rong Tian still gets a happy ending without facing consequences. An He's experience can't be overlooked, especially since he was a minor.
The reviewer's comments section has caught my attention, with some justifying Rong Tian's treatment. But An He's role was significant; his death shaped the plot. Dismissing his suffering because he's the ML is unjust. Another reviewer sees the book as a subtle exploration of abuse, but romanticizing toxic relationships is not acceptable. Fictional stories, including this one, have real-life implications.
Overall, I rate this story:
1 star for the plot (it's a war tale, but it falls short),
1 star for some side characters,
1 star for world-building (it's passable).
Notably, the guard Rong Hu's inaction during An He's abuse is a major issue. His silence speaks volumes, and I can't forgive him or others who enable such mistreatment.
If my honesty offends, I apologize, but I stand by my thoughts. Everyone's taste differs, and if you enjoyed the book, that's great. But it's important to address flaws, even in fiction, as they can influence readers. Have a wonderful day, readers!
A pretty good book10/10 wud recommend
Author can you please update regularly.PleasePlease