I just want to give my review of your story. Good storyline because it's interesting. Good writing skills. Please update at least once a week.
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what a nice beginning I hope you can continue it it would be a shame to stop and I would like to see where this is going...…………………………………………………………………...
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Pretty fun.
Amazing story, kept me reading for hours on end just to see what happened next, quite disappointed that it ended where it did but will definitely read more once it finally released.
Very good book if you are a big video game fan, especially if you’re into D&D or other RPGs. There is very little world building in the beginning, and whether that’s a good or bad thing is up for you to decide. Character development is kindve bugged lol, but that is likely because this story doesn’t exactly focus on the perspective of our MC and flips around to different peoples’ perspectives quite a bit. Story development isn’t too fast or too slow, but edges a bit more towards the slow side, which brings this novel down for me but I’m sure there are many who find this appealing. Overall, adding in the fact that this book is a good 60% comedy, this is definitely worth the read if you’re not looking for something very serious!
Hi all, yes it's me again, your translator chuchutrain. Really happy to be taking over to translate once again for Qi Peijia's novels, after finishing The Legendary Mechanic almost a year ago! For those of you who are long term fans of Black Star, come join me in this ride of Sci-fi/game element + some cultivation aspect (new twist that QPJ is planning)! For those new to his books, just sit tight and enjoy how he spins the story :) (p.s. you can take a look at TLM in the meantime)
Gonna review this a second time to tell you guys that the mc is reverend insanity level of evil he kills a king then takes over his wife's body then after she died he took over her kid's body than when he died by an assassin he took over his body then took over the strongest guy in the kingdom body then hosted an event where he killed over 50k people with a formation and proceeded to eat all of their bodies to turn in to a dragon caterpillar.
This novel is in the top 5 of the novels that I have ever written.I even read it myself (mostly for editing but that is not the point).Jokes aside, give it a try (〃￣︶￣)人(￣︶￣〃)
Looks promising. I cannot wait to start reading it. I just hope that it does not get to be one of them, premium stories, though. It sure breaks my heart to be unable to afford to read the latest chapter of a story that you really like.
So its not a horrible story. The writinf quality isnt great and is very simplistic. there is also typical chinese ‘patriotism’ which can be a huge blow to a story like this. im guessing this story will ultimately be dropped because a large number of readers aren’t a fan of this type of ‘patriotism’.