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The story seems really good! I haven't caught up yet but so far it's really interesting. I'm glad the translation is good, and the story development is amazing as well!
I have only read one chapter so far so I will be sure to update this review in the future The grammar spelling mistakes incorrect words etc break the flow of the story as I have to stop myself sometimes and try and figure out what is actually being said I also feel that the first chapter moves very quickly with very little world building or any build up whatsoever which I feel is necessary since unlike quick wear world hopping novels this is different I appreciate that the authors first language isn’t English however the use of an editor or someone to look it over and make sure that the errors are caught and remedied would make this story much better
Why not tell anywhere in the title or synopsis, that you’re just reposting a translated novel? Give credits where it’s due? Why make it seem like it’s your work?
This is very good. I read hundreds, if not thousand of novels and can't get excited about them easily anymore. This one was different. It is one of the novels that will light a spark in you. If the author keeps this up, the novel will become the next cultivation novel classic.
not perfect but good storys i Hope author will go on with it?☺
This novel is bloody awesome webnovel better not drop this beauty please let it go on forever and ever. Thats all I am gonna say . what else could I say
Fairly good. Hope it gets picked up........................................................................................................................
Almost a full 5* very close, very well done book story is also very well developed. Can be a top contender if the author can sustain a good release volume. Very well worth the read and if i dare say even better than most premium novels currently out there. Must read.
I don’t understand why the villain has to get together with every heroine. It’s ridiculous. Update more.
Well written, the MC’s personality was realistic and we got to see some of his inner workings. Consistent logic, well as much as can be when magic is involved. It was a bit of a leap at the end though. But very, very hot. 10/10 as an evening read ??
