While we were walking Roger said; '' My stage name is Nuret. I want you to call me by that. ''
"I see" I responded unable to bring myself to ask what was bothering him.
And the two elders leapt into the pillar of light, disappearing without a trace.
Seriously? No more updates? Thats depressing I was expecting more chapters and action ever since I started reading it now I'm really feeling bad for picking it up
i really liked how the author presented the characters and the overall plot
A slice of life that suddenly takes a drastic turn. Creative and unique. I really like it.
e uma boa obra, consegue captar a atenção do leitor de forma significativa.
I just binged this and I really liked it. Its a very unique story with the protagonist being beat down over and over again with no holds barred, many times to her own fault. The overarching plot is well written with the unravelling of the memory loss and the whole Rakon deal, making her remember experiences while killing off everyone relevant to it. Really sold me on the downward mental spiral. Here are some thoughts:There were two timeskips, both understandable, but quite sudden. I feel like you could've eased out of them with some development. For example, after the first time-skip you could've had a scene giving insight on Lillian's love-hate relationship with Kalika, or after the second time-skip made it so Rhonda was overly affectionate to the point where it was clear she was hiding something. Often times I felt that some scenes were too sudden and after something happens, the impact on Kalika is rushed. e.g. Rakon and her... yeah. She spent like 2 seconds mulling over it and it didn't seem to contribute to her demonization much. Feel like she should be hating Rakon a LOT more than just "I wanna kill all the demons including Rakon
Shameless author here. Thank you for all the lovely reviews. I hope you like this project. Please collect and let's journey together in this journey. See you in the comments.
well to be sure what are other 2 colours as rainbow only has 7 colours ?
I love the way you write! The story is well-paced, and I like how the scenes are written and described. Especially how you described what the protagonist was feeling along with the well-written dialogue, this is a good read! Keep it up! ^^
Obligatory Author Review. We are all familiar with the beast taming genre: choose your preferred pet, train them, find the legendary resources to level them up faster and reach the top. But what if you were the very first to have that power? What if nobody knew the training methods, necessary resources or even which monsters could bring out potential of the Beast Master?That is the situation that our MC Karl has found himself in. I do hope that you all enjoy the story.