Curious to see more, keep it up author??
wow!!! great storyline full of twists and turns. Impactful and surprising reveals, and in-depth character development
This is a great read! The concepts are generic but written in a novel way. The characters are interesting. The best part of this story is the world building in my opinion as the author has unique ideas as to how the antagonists do things. Grammar could do with some editing though.
I love the story however there are now after chapter 48 repeat chapters with different titles as such it would be perfect if chapters weren't repeated.
harem ? I'm not reading dis bra. why you do this to me.
Hey author here, I hope you guys can give my first novel here a chance. And if you like it add to your collections.
the MC is pretty dense and nieve, but his background and age kind of explain this. feels like a flawed person who doesn't always make the right choices, not like the author had him make dumb decisions for the plot. the story overall is pretty good and original. The pacing just seems off, I think it may be due to how much the MCs travel is detailed or details about background characters when it's not clear if they are important to the story.
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I'm pretty sure the author had best interests in creating this story and I do think that indeed, a lot of thought was poured into making it. However, the initial chapters lack elements of keeping the book interesting - I mean it in a way that, too much information dump was done, tastelessly. It can bore anyone who wants to get an initial impression and overview of the plot. Thanks, but if you can do a few edits, that would be better.
an amazing book by an amazing author. keep up the good work! (I miss you,dm me sometime?) keep it up! why are you still here? read this book and share it and give gifts and stones!!!!!!!
The story is not bad and if you love realistic stories you might love this. but im going to be honest i dislike this story a lot, i would never consider it as a romance story, more of drama, realism, sports but besides that if your a romantic guy like me you will hate this, especially the ntr made me feel uncomfortable i already has a bad opinon and pessimism towards real life but now i also has to have a pessmism outlook in fiction. It's not bad author don't get me wrong, but it's not for everyone especially for me who has a sensitive heart when it comes to romance.
The concept of the story seems interesting. It doesn't gives the vibes of a cliché novel that is usually found on this website. That is why i would suggest that you should novel a try...