greatjob as always.. I love all your books!
I love this book! One of my favorites already! This author is seriously amazing at writing emotion and showing us how the protagonist thinks and acts. I love the characters and the mysterious plot!
I thoroughly enjoyed the series but eventually stopped due to the translator's frequent posting of unedited or minimally edited machine-translated content, which made comprehension challenging. Multiple issues arose, such as unclear character identities, inconsistent plot points, and switched pronouns. Fortunately, a new translator has started afresh, and based on the three chapters I've read, the quality has significantly improved. I highly recommend giving them a try.
The story can feel冗长 at times, and personally, I think cutting some minor villain characters would enhance the narrative. Initially, the story presents a strong foundation. The new translator's work is not only coherent but also demonstrates literary prowess, making the reading experience smoother. However, potential readers should be aware that there hasn't been a romantic development between the main character (MC) and the heroine by the point I stopped, and it doesn't appear imminent, which might be disappointing given the story's initial setup.
Another issue is that the author seems to have forgotten the MC's violent introduction, where they killed people and left messages in blood. Now, the character is portrayed as pretending to be bad, which can be confusing for readers who haven't encountered those early scenes.
Ok just one thing, READ IT !! This novel is awesome i really mean it you should read it, it is worth the time spent reading it.
Thanks I will read it later
Heroine? yes i take some really good
Two and a half months and no updates.
No, it's just slow af
The Author went missing ?
Does he really have master?
worth it, i tell you..i wanted to write a review but im too lazy to do long comments..tehee
To begin with, the novel serves its purpose well as a light-hearted, action-packed story. However, there are a few areas for improvement:
1. The main character (MC) encounters various situations where he attempts to learn from them but frequently slips back into carelessness after making efforts to be more cautious.
2. The author's choice to have the MC speak like a 12-year-old, using excessive profanity and the term "bruh," feels inconsistent and detracts from the character's maturity.
3. Descriptions of events and character interactions can become unnecessarily lengthy, making the reading experience somewhat tedious. For instance, explaining a side character's relationship takes several paragraphs when a concise summary would suffice.
Despite these minor setbacks, the MC and supporting characters exhibit competence. The MC avoids typical tropes, such as being overly cautious with female interactions or turning enemies into friends. The romance is handled well, with clear boundaries and no indication of a harem. The relationship between the MC and the dragon girl, who serves as the main love interest, starts as a genuine friendship, which adds a natural progression to their bond.
While the MC's height might lead some to label her as a "loli," the author's portrayal of these characters as young girls without romantic intentions distinguishes them from the stereotype. As I continue reading, I remain intrigued and will see how the story unfolds.