It should have been about time he gave the signal to attack. But he seemed hesitant. Frozen even. He took a step back, as if being pushed by something. Just as Keita was beginning to question his bizarre behavior, he felt it. The desert roared, as thousands of Dragonborn were marching all at once. The army that should have been defending, attacked the humans, catching everyone off guard.
Hundreds of years passes, when suddenly Way primal clone expression became awful. He frowns and told everyone he has to go somewhere.
"No way, I heard he dated and broke up with the number one beauty, An kuhanin!"
Without a word, the three Genin moved in behind Kakashi, looking at each other and then at their sensei. They were all a little nervous, but this wasn't the first time they had been in a situation where their lives were in danger. All it took were some deep breaths and remembering that things could be much worse to be able to keep calm.
Hi. I'm the author of this story. You can call me Adivonna. I'm an amateur writer. I'm an absolute fan of stories with villainess main characters so I decided to write my own. I hope you enjoy the story.Btw, I pettily gave myself a 5 star rating. He-he' ?
Story starts out great, then the author starts to drag the story out, milking every chapter. The mc gets draped in outrageous plot armor, all powerful people like him, all villains despite differences in age and cultivation are outwitted, and yet the nothing really gets done other than the occasional formation blowing up, which then magically leads to everything going the mc's way. Story would be so much better if mc gained strength in a more tangible way, but all he's done for hundreds of chapters is eat ghosts and not advance in cultivation. Was enjoying the "eats gods" and "divine god in the making" angle until I realized it just takes away any suspense that was remaining. Cultivators in meat space won't kill him because they all love him, ghosts can't kill him because he eats them, there's literally nothing in the world that actually poses a threat.
I am amazed. I have been continuously reading this novel…. I can’t put it down. Story is good, the scope of the universe building is good, and the characters are still being themselves is good. The only difficulty I am experiencing is the multitude of cultivation realms and remembering them. There are a lot and the names aren’t easy to remember. Otherwise, this is a terrific novel.
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haven't read the book yet, I'm currently here for free pass?
I like the book. The story is nice. .. Need to add more chapters faster.... I like it. Fun and easy read
Would recommend to anyone? No, but definitely mention to people interested in the genre.This novel has an interesting concept overall, but tries in my opinion to cover too many big storylines either too similar or too different one from the other, hence looking sometimes repetitive, sometimes way too fast paced. Especially unlikeable are psychological/thought process-related parts replaced by a short resuming line (often a quick author direct comment) which is very frustrating. A short, unintroduced sentence about a totally never mentioned preparation that took place in the recent past is often used to counter any blatantly unexpected or potentially huge problem by the author, but it ends up to appear for the badlooking, forced patch on a ripping lore area that it is.Language is not the best, but the reader can usually understand what is written. Sometimes descriptions can be longer than needed, slowing reading pace a little too much.The main lore concept is, like previously mentioned, kind of interesting and developed in a good direction overall. However in the early chapters it looks like a very forced fusion of the most cliché, unneeded fantasy novel details, to the point of being laughable and ruin the plot, but at least doesn't tend to happen again in the novel.Overall not a heavy read, but not too relaxing either.Also, I love Pandas.
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