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Shameless Author #2198 reporting for duty.NevermindIf I were to rate my novel.Writing Quality - 3/5, slowly changing to a 4/5 as my literary skills improve.Story Development - 4/5 The beginning is quite slow, but it'll generally speed up as time goes on.Character Design - 4/5. Characters aren't really one dimensional, but some are just made on the spot and left by the dust as one of the MC's acquaintances. Some will appear in different instances of the novel.World Background - 5/5. The only thing I believe I did well on, not including the block of texts in the history chapter. (Don't read it unless you like that type of stuff.). The Frontier is the boundary of discovery and improvement. Follow the story as you see the progression of the MC and the improvement of my literary devices as times go on.
I'm going to be honest I have no words to describe this except that I Love It!!!!, one of my favorites, waiting for dem bootyful bl moments after noticing a few♡, so please update soon author ♡♡♡♡♡ ☆▪°• ?▪°•☆,
I abandoned that story because the MC saved a guy who cheated on him, then he becomes a whore who can't decide anything for himself......................................................
Hi, My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
this is one crazy novel well feels like there are 2 MCand world has started building itself with words oaf author and such enormous potential is rare i hope to see more of this madnesseach character is given well deserved attention and it's not too much as well and grammar and grip on language feels like author is crazily firm in them
Nothing much going on besides the MC visiting various places. The issue is the English which makes it not a smooth read. Trying to understand things by reading over and over is no fun.
Nice Novel. Creative and Unique. .....................................................................................................................
Full 5 stars, I have no idea why this series isn't on the top of the charts, it very much deserves to be.Random stuff to post review: qef43frvbq4gev325gf3
I love this book and I love how the ideas come together to give me this Joy and flow. I love the fact that It's as though I am watching the story rather than reading it ???
Nice story and Plot but there is no update for a long time, hope author start updating novel like earlier...Thanks for the Chapter........
Love alien tech so much and completely hooked with the story. Nice development, fast paced, understandable language and makes it very easy to read. Loving it so far and can't wait for more.
Having spent hundreds upon hundreds of dollars on spirt stones on this site to read books I can honestly say that this book ranks in the top 5 I have ever read here. The MC is ridiculously OP but yet not in a overbearing uninteresting way like other stories. There is humor, face slapping, a huge mystery, even some sadness. The pacing and development of both the characters are world is godly. Highly recommend this story, and prepare yourself for a rollarcoster of emotions when reading.
