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everything in this story turns around when he comes back to earth and the story started to become apathetic events and more on the stupidity side.. such a waste of good story and then when it's approaching the end game, it becomes a big disappointment. i will stop reading now i am exactly at page 1680 and can't read it anymore I'm so annoyed with how the main character becomes so stupid i regretted reading PMG 2 I shouldn't have .
Ch.4Woah, wait... So it converts magic energy into mechanical energy via a rotation formation then converts that mechanical energy to electrical energy then back to mechanical energy again?
This is an okay story. I would give it 3 out of 5 stars. Its very generic and the fl, although she has the halo, and a bit of business sense, her stupidity is like the usual generic fl where they can't tell that someone has motives/interest against/in them or something. She swiftly deals with some of her enemies so faceslapping is swift but slow for main antagonists. Ml is typical but also likable. The golden fingers are intense for this novel. Honestly felt tht this could've been completed in less than 200 chaps. And its a bit annoying how fl seems to know so many things, only the music composing was learnt but she seems to have piano talent and all these other heaven defying abilities that she didn't have in her previous manga artist life. But this fiction is still ok and fun to read when bored.
Thanks for your update... H
Cool story...The best... Even though LueYeoYeo is a smub and every annoying lady and a lazy lady, she is still the best woman...I mean she didn't even want to revenge or backstab anyone... That's why surname Qin still love her, he saw in her what her true character is... She really is the best lady...I wish I will find someone like her husband...That's what they called... loving someone unconditionally....#hoping to meet you in life and be with you (anyone that have the character of surname Qin)
WRITING QUALITY 5 STARS: I just can't spot some errors in your work, IT'S PERFECT!!!!!
STABILITY UPDATES 3 STARS: Released Ch1 on the month of July and the latest 19 hours ago. The release is not steady.
STORY DEVELOPMENT 5 STARS: In the first Chapters, there's already going on, since the plot is unique, the development in this story is refreshing... I just crave for more.
CHARACTER DESIGN 4 STARS: As the story goes on, you will gradually be able to get to know the Characters personality.
WORLD BACKGROUND 5 STARS: A normal world, no magic or something, just technology. Gave it 5 stars since WE can relate to it.
When I read the First Charpter, I added it immediately on my Library.. It is simply promising
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A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it?How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in,1- His devil side2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town)4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed)5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc...Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way.Writing Quality - 4Stability of Updates - 5Story Development - 3Character Design - 1 World Background - 3The total score - 3.2
just when things started goin better novel was dropped and announced to have a physical novel year later still no news I don't know if author died or disappeared mysteriously from earth
i love the way you express love here? i loved it and hope to see such more intresting stories from you? keep going my loveee❤Thankyou for this beautiful story!!