Awesome characters liked the story progression up until the ryoji temple arc because it seemed to be so rushed, all the guys should have been taken to the temple and the girls taken in as ninja possibly made allies that way. overall a great genre to take inspiration from just need a d&d type board game to run so many possibilities and roll with the best story but no matter how you look at it having time to mature a storyline is always best concerning quality other than that loved the immersive storytelling great job authorsan. ??
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Would have neen five stars if he didn’t make it feel like it was strong from start mc with all that soul power and all. I personally prefer a strong from start mc than weak to strong
