I finished all 19 chapters and although I enjoy your premise and everything leading up to MC awakening his hidden gift, I found an issue with the execution of during the time Judgment and Pride were introduced. Chapter 14 and 15 were the biggest issues since we have sudden swaps between first person pov and third person pov. For example, you use "I
Despite the grammatical errors, the story is pretty interesting so far. I really like this style of Japanese Isekai, I hope you don't abandon the story
Grammerly has nothing on this man, they should be paying him instead to proofread. Bet he has 100/100 on it. Anyways great novel you have, keep going. Loved the daily uploads so far.
Keep UP the good work. I really love it a lot. It started out ok then it just kept getting better from that point on. I hope that we find out more about the system and what it's capable of doing.
Loving what you did with this story so far, even brought Jack along. You're like Gene Roddenberry who used Dylan Hunt over and over again. So Cute. The characters are likable, unique, and varied in racial class.An Undead, A Moon Elf, a High Human and a Seraphim. What else could you possibly ask for!? Keep it up Author-sama! You have our support!
The story is good but the Asura is to overpowered. If his opponents were just asking strong then it'd be better. Don't take this wrong, it's a good novel and keep up the work. ???
good to read. I want more chapters I give 5 stars for more chapters. give me more chapters... 5 stars for more chapters. I want them.. I need them.. more chapters.
Getting interesting auther san lol??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I want more chapters ?..... Main character is overpowered and the story is nice.. Keep it up author...... Hope the story goes on..
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Pretty funny, only thing that bums me out is that the MC never uses the lottery :(.
Good start and interesting novel to read. I hope there no NTR in the future the main character already suffer enough. I am kind interesting how main character going to deal with the other reincarnator.