Annoying characters. The mc's brain is supposed to be intelligent but acts like a dumb 10 yr old retard who has never seen money. The premise of the story is great but the mc ruins it for me. The fake boyfriend, father in law and more other sh,it. I bet he is going to marry the fake so called gf and seems like the author couldn't find any other way to integrate the mc into the supernatural society without using the most annoying plot. The mc kills the thugs for killing him but let's the so called fake father in law go and gets bitten by his fake fiance. I especially hate the mc's who try to act cool and **** when they end up always being the hero and are manipulated very easily.
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Author books are very underrated. Idk why but the novel should be on higher rank. 10/10 for me
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: WQ- could be better, keep working on it.;,;. SoU- no complaints here.;,;. SD- What story development, I mean, there is a little bit, but it is mostly an information dump... CD- well, you have given the MC a lot of design, but lack when it comes to other characters, they almost don't exist... WB- did it with an information dump, but definitely covered it fully.;,;.Positive Feedback: Good job on your world background and keeping your story updated at a constant pace... you told your readers before hiatus too, so good on you.;,;.Personal Feedback: I think this is a decent foundation to a story, but it would have been if you wrote all of this information down near the beginning for yourself, and slowly explained it through the story.;,;. I apologize, but I will not be continuing your story... for the sake of those who enjoy it, I hope you continue until it is finished.;,;.Scores: WQ 4/5 SoU 5/5 SD 1/5 CD 3/5 WB 5/5 total 3.6/5
Based on the numerous comments I've seen in this work, I believe it's appropriate to write another review.First and foremost, I apologize if you find too much jargon in this tale. I'm not trying to appear clever, but I'd want to find an easier way to explain my views. I don't want to beat about the bush with many words and wind up in this cycle of explanation, so I'll use one or two vocabulary to explain my idea clearly.Another aspect of this work is its formative stage.The first stage involves the MC interacting with himself and the outside environment. The MC depicted his perspective on the world and the people around him.The approach may be self-serving and hence cause readers to dislike the MC; nonetheless, his paranoid vision of the world is due to his experience.The interaction of the MC and other characters is the book's second phase. With time, I fleshed out all of these crucial characters and provided a memorable encounter that moved the narrative ahead.The world is the final stage. I brought the world to life by bringing forth the viewpoint of invisible charactersto move the plot ahead.This novel is primarily about intelligence and brain use. Although it included martial arts, that was not the focus of the novel (at least for now). However, martial arts will play a crucial role in the plot's conclusion.Thanks again for visiting, and Merry Christmas ?.
Just wanted to write that I'm still enjoying the story. I am invested in Kenji more than anyone else, but he and his merry band are all engaging and fun.Thanks for a great light novel experience!
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A nice book with a good contents , Nice story development and character design and great world background. I can't wait for more chapters to be released. Keep up the good work.
Not a bad series. A transmigration background is given a future twist. The MC reincarnates with his memories from the past into a future version that has been privileged. Money means nothing to this person, but his ability to the neural interface has been restricted and is sub-par. An attempt at an illegal method to improve his neural abilities resulted in his death and allowed the person from the past to gain his body, memories, and money. But the neural problems were fixed and this new Host has to take advantage of the new opportunities that are possible.
Well, I like your novel rise of the anti hero and the revies are good so i, will try it....................................................... . . . . . . . My english is not good so sorry
I’ve read about 50 chapters and while the novel starts off good and is interesting the translation and editing go downhill really fast to the point I think reading from a mtl site is just as good