I've been crying from the 1st arc till the last one, not one arc can be passed without shedding tears
What a disgusting man
Please update. I really really really like this story.
I've read up to Ch 27, so I'm basing my review on what I've read so far.Firstly, I want to say that I really enjoy this novel, it's so rare to read a sign-in novel with a female MC, so I was so happy to find this one! The setting is interesting and diverse, and the characters are good and have great dynamics.Now because I've read a lot of sign-in stories, there are some things I think this novel could do better. Sometimes I forget this is a sign-in novel at all, as the rewards aren't mentioned often and the system takes a backseat to the plot of the story. I consider this a problem, as no matter how good the story is I think the basis should be the system and how it impacts the story. I would love it if the rewards were mentioned more often. I know the author said they didn't want it to impact the plot and pacing too much, but I think the rewards of the system should have more impact on the plot. The system is supposed to be super intelligent, why doesn't it give her things she really needs (or might not know she needs) and then those rewards can play an integral part in the next little bit of the story? It doesn't matter how extravagant the rewards are as long as they're used properly by her and the plot.I also am surprised by her decision to start a charity right away rather than a big business that could increase her funds substantially and help fund her charity work.Otherwise, I really like the novel and I can't wait till the love interests are introduced!
Really a good novel ??✨. But need to work on making the descriptions of people or places fewer ?
The grammar and writing are above average and the story is progressing smoothly... it's great overall. Hope for more updates ?||[img=exp][img=exp]
Great book, well written and very original. it isn't a cliche tropes with just the names and powers changed. you can see that a lot of thoughts was put in it while writing the story. hope it will continue to maintain this quality for the rest of the story. a big thanks to the author for this quality work, very refreshing after a lot of badly written books.
The paragraphs are too large and blocky especially in the first few chapters. Other than the spacing everything else was ok, enough to pass the time.
If the story backgrond change to happen on my country(One of Asean country) ,then I will say that it really fit to the reality ,We have a lot of case like this story.We have a lot of corruption on our country system
Read a bit of it but its a good novel... A bit too similar to Dual Cultivation which I am reading so I probably won't continue with it... Author should accept the similarities are too much to not agree he got inspired by Dual Cultivation... Nothing wrong with being inspired and writing a similar but different type of novel... The worst thing to do is deny it was inspired by another... Not crediting or acknowledging or denying the source is as bad as it gets...
We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation!I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests.I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.
The start is definitely a bit slow, but it’s still worth it! The only issue I have is the sometimes, the plot is a bit too convoluted and confusing to understand, so I’m left not knowing what is happening.Either way, an amazing read! Keep up the good work!