Zoe_Tagboto
Honestly great book so far! Can’t wait to see Apollo and Lamia’s journey! They just begun their cultivation both going to different sects then they planned due to certain circumstances. I’m excited to see where this goes!
terrorism terrorist bloody peaceful inbred slimy imbecile git hedonist sister f**k** oprresor religion based on war cruelty cruel people so called peaceful in name only
I am so confuzzled what does music and Satan have to do with each other????. Maybe it is trying to say music is evil...?
Pleasantly surprised by how good this was.................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................
So far so good don't know but After reading Reverned insanity I like villein novels more and more and this here is a hidden gem just give it a shot....... Matured characters not some haughty type in this novel which is good... Writing simple and good... Whatever ALL CHECK.
Completely honest reviewI'm not a perfect writer, but I'll try to make the story as understandable as possible (I'm not very good at storytelling either)I will try to give life to everyone in the story, I do not like to see only the generic NPC of a game, I want them to also have a life, not only exist for my main character and the other secondary characters.Combat: I will try to make the combat between each character as detailed and understandable as possible and omit some sections in which the main or secondary character continuously kill the same species of a creature so that this scene does not become repetitive and boring.Detail of the world and the surroundings: I want to describe 100% the whole world of heart of the oasis, giving the reader the best capacity to understand the world in which the main character is currently.Quality of writing: speaking sincerely, I'm not very good at writing and may be able to find some errors in the text or even multiple errors, so I will keep abreast of everything.Speed of publication: I will be as fast as possible in terms of publication from one chapter to another, but I have estimated that it will be 1 chapter per day.Thank you for reading. I leave at your discretion how many stars think that this novel should have.
an actual good story, you like to complain about systems? this story doesn't have a system so far, you hate super OP arrogant mc? this mc isn't super op arrogant mc, you hate dumb MC? this MC is smart and doesn't think with his "deck".yes, this story is slightly a slow burn but in comparison to older cultivation stories, this isn't a slow burn at all.it's great, there is not a system that does everything for the mc, but it builds the characters up and the side characters, and you feel the desert that is gradually opening up as you go further in the story and explore further.the story has a lot of potential and what i like the most about the story which might be a weird one but i very much like the clan he's from as they actually try to help their younger clan members up and they deserve everything good that is happening to them.if you are getting annoyed by another story, just read this one and the pent up annoyance will go away lol
I've read so many generic eastern fantasy novels that I just can't read any more of them but this , this is gold 24 carat gold I would recommend this to any eastern fantasy fan it might seem generic but so far I haven't been bored it's entertained me also it's actually funny at times unlike TSS I still don't get why people like that garbage ( it's just my opinion chill)
MORE Very similar to I Will Transmigrate In 10 days so if you like that then this is your cup of tea only thing is the updates are a bit slow and the World building is almost zero, I still don't know if the real world is ancient or modern times
Honestly speaking, I believe and hope it’s gonna start to get more and MORE AWESOME starting from chapter 26 God’s Plan hahaha. #HopeGanbatte Author, that’s the reason for this near 5 star review haha
I enjoyed the story up until he got the dragons. I quit reading because they were both girls. Of course his pets are girls, all story’s that have pets end up with having a girl pet who turns into a human form and then falls in love with the mc. Which turns the story into a harem. And unfortunately I don’t like harems.
Very promising start my good sir. I hope that you can live to up to my high expectations. Hopefully you’ll continue and keep making awesome chapters.
