"Heal"
"It's okay now Serenity. We're in the clear, so you don't have to dress like that anymore"
After passing through the multiple halls to his room, they arrived back at the pool. The place they first shared a physical intimacy together. They were both reminded of it and Yu Mei began to blush.
Imagining her reaction, he could not help but chuckle as he too hugged her tighter but not tight enough to crush her. Uoron then rested his head on top of her head filled with content and happiness.
"At the current moment, the Skyward Sword Sect is slowly deteriorating and fallen from grace as a prestigious sect. We have had little luck in finding disciples with potential in the past generations." said Su Chow as he shook his head.
''This is feasible but what happened if our race encounters an attack while those who are strong are out.'' A demon sect master asked worriedly.
Clearly, I'm heavily influenced by editing this novel ;p Still, I had to make a review since I'm a harcc0re fellow reader xD I've been working on the novel since the very start, you can say it's my editing baby. Along with it, I'm growing up too, and striving to improve. Let's get things straight; it's not your every day post-apocalyptic novel, you won't find too gruesome scenes like other novels of its kind. Several times, the MC looks like a NPC game character, he's not that talkative but that's what makes him special. He just shows things through his actions, he knows he is weak and he strives to improve. Some people may not like his decisions, but it's still being elaborated why he didn't do something. Some people complain about the short chapters, I on the other hand, not because I have to work less - on the contrary I have to work more to rephrase some lines in order to make the reader 'feel' what's taking place, prefer that the chapters are smaller cause they're not that repetitive and you hardly want to skip lines (once again that's how I feel, you may have other opinions.) I will agree that it resembles dbz fights, but you can still wait for it to pile up and binge read it later, at least that's what I do with most novels ;p Last but not least, I find the concept really intriguing. I mean, a car that can be constantly upgraded? What will it become next, an air-carrier, a spaceship, a Transformer, Gundam, Power Rangers' Megazord? There are plenty of choices ;p That's all I had to say till this point, if anything changes I'll update ;p Thank you for your feedback and your support for the novel ^_^P.S. The updating stability is top-notch, we haven't missed a chapter ;p
thats why some girl saw this almost deading duike
When he caught sight of R countrymen appearing outside the cage one by one, with firearms in their hands… Ling Tian understood right away.
Amazing Novel Writing Quality is very Good Story Development is out Class Good Story Development ?????????????????????????????????????
Ok overall. The author does not put himself in the seat of the reader so it's lead to a lot BUT a Lot of incomprehensions and make you feel that the Mc have lost a bit of his brain.
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