It seems like I am beginning to comprehend the other readers' perspectives. I tried my best to read on, but the main character (MC) really grated on my nerves. I concur with Engue's view. The MC comes across as a hypocrite, constantly talking about distancing himself from the heroines to gain strength but frequently getting entangled with them. He uses excuses like "I can't abandon a girl" as justification for helping or saving them.
Frankly, I find the MCs who openly express their desire to save the heroines more genuine. As for the story, I gave it two stars due to the intriguing concept. Unfortunately, the execution falls short. However, there's a fascinating theory I've seen in the summary that hasn't been discussed much: Potential spoiler ahead.
The MC might be the protagonist of a sequel to the game, which was released after his demise, hence his unawareness. This could explain the appearance of characters like Victoria, the Duke's daughter he initially perceived as minor, Seria (I might have the spelling wrong), the bullied girl determined to become strong in swordsmanship, and the adventuress, whose father, an Earl, rivaled the Sword Saint in strength.
These "mob girl" dynamics appear to resemble typical heroine tropes. Just to clarify, this is mere speculation, not confirmed fact. Despite this theory, the MC's behavior eventually became too much for me, so I decided to stop reading.
Firstly, kudos to the translators for their excellent work, granting readers like me the opportunity to delve into this extraordinary piece. The novel itself is a true gem, particularly in its portrayal of the harmonious interactions between Gong and Shou. Their warm and healthy relationship is truly heartwarming, characterized by open communication that prevents misunderstandings and unnecessary conflicts. The depth of the characters, Gong's drive to improve, the vulnerability and longing the author expresses for a normal life with Shou, and the mutual support they provide are all captivating aspects that leave me craving more of their love story. The side characters are equally adorable, genuine, and caring towards the protagonists.
Moreover, this novel has raised my expectations for transmigration stories with systems. I appreciate the freedom given to the main character, whose primary objective is safeguarding their lives and the male lead's. The reliance on the system as an assistive tool rather than a rigid script that forces the protagonist to adhere to a predetermined path is refreshing. The fact that the Shou often takes the lead in strategizing while the system aids them adds an intriguing dynamic.
The pacing of the plot is well-executed, allowing the protagonist to adapt gradually to the criminal underworld. There's also a touch of mystery that keeps the reader engaged, with plot twists that are nothing short of mind-bending. In conclusion, this novel holds a special place in my favorites list, offering a perfect blend of action, intrigue, romance, and tender moments. It's a book that, despite the intense emotions it evokes, left me with a few extra dark circles under my eyes from late nights reading.
The narrative unfolds as a heartwarming tale, yet ultimately concludes on a somber note. The reaper, or Shinigami, is portrayed as a detached figure, solely dedicated to his duties. Enter Asahi Katagiri, the unfortunate individual whose death announcement awaits. Despite his compassionate nature, Asahi's reaction to the news is initially disbelief followed by swift acceptance, which while understandable, lacks depth.
While the story's premise was charming, the tragic elements and emotional intensity failed to resonate. The pacing seemed hurried, making it difficult to fully grasp the unfolding events despite a clear plot structure. The protagonist, Shinigami, provided some enjoyable moments with his introspective thoughts and reactions, but Asahi's character felt underdeveloped. His response to his impending death was reduced to shock and acceptance, without any significant emotional exploration, even compared to the reaper.
Additionally, the romance in the story felt rushed and突如其veness, as if it was shoehorned in. Overall, the tale is decent, but it falls short in terms of emotional impact and character development. The translations, however, are commendable.
Is this any good? Compare it to Shadow Slave, The Begining after the End, or Supreme Magus please! I am looking for a new novel to read that doesn't have a spoon fed Protagonist like other novels.
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Is the writing quality better than the author's previous novels
The narrative is fantastic! The protagonist, FL, is incredibly hilarious with her constant misinterpretations causing laughter. What's even more impressive is her cunning, as she outwits her foes through amusing misunderstandings. I don't have any issues with the story itself, but the translation site has an inconsistency problem. The chapter counts are all over the place, leading many readers to complain about the slow pacing due to frequent, fragmented updates. Just a heads up, there are actually 181 episodes, not chapters, to look forward to.
I've come across numerous isekai stories, and while this one isn't the most extravagant world, it stands out as a well-constructed MMO-inspired setting. The strength of the narrative lies in the interactions between the protagonist and the diverse array of characters, which truly brings the story to life.
It wouldn't be classified as a slice-of-life tale, but it effectively illustrates the consequences of embracing life's simple pleasures, like good food and godlike abilities. A particular highlight is the hilarious scene with the chocolate and sugar-addicted dragon girl.
Here's a breakdown for better comprehension:
Setting: ***
World-building: ***
Characters: *****
Entertainment: *****
Overall, the story delivers strong entertainment value, particularly in its character dynamics and engaging plot.
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I'm disgusted at Lele who never stops on bullying loli Tian which results on MC mistreating her despite all her hard work...
I pretty sure that the name was the chronicles of the fallen world or something like that.
The mc is too high profile and nothing to hide, he like to be praise and showing off his awesomeness, typical chinese novel. The onlookers and other characters in this novel are feels like the same person, they have same personality, expression, and the way they speaks are all the same.