ProfaneImmortal
Overall a good storry, but it has it´s faults as well.First of all the characters, the main character is the only one who we get to know really, the rest just apear for a couple of chapters and become irelevant rather quickly. He rarely has conversations with people that last more than a couple of sentences, it would be nice to increase his relations and interactions with the people arround him. (Idon´t know your future plans so maybe this is already planed) furthermore the mc is becoming more and more powerful physically but he doesn´t show much emotion other than his strict planing. I mean he has crazy high iteligence but everybody has his faults, there are no perfect people.The story development is solely focused on the mc and where he goes, there are some mentions and short pov´s of the villains but nothing major yet. It would be nice to learn more about the backhround and everthing that is going on arround him.The aspect of world background is in my opinion pretty good overall. The only problem I have is that we know where he is, what he does but not much more. We rarely get decriptions of his suroundings or other stuff like this.As a final note, this is my first review of any kind of storry I´v read. So this it probably rather subjective and partly wrong so read it yourself. It is a great story if you like story with an insanely powerful mc who gets stronger and strong in short period of time.Finaly to the author: please try to increase the chapter length, your story is great but it would be even better with longer chapters, this way we as readers can imerse ourselfes more and not just read 5 minutes or so each day and forget what happened the next.P.S. English isn´t my first language so go easy on my gramar
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I'm so excited about this novel, the beginning looks promising so I will give you 5 stars for now...............................................................................................
I think this novel is pretty good... but for some like me who isn't using English as primary language or some who is not good at English. Maybe this is not your taste. I like novels who are always straight to the point and does not have a roundabout or using deep words as narrating a story... I've only read till chapter 3 and my head hurts. But, this novel I think has a good story based on the other reviews!
Dropped at ch 32. This is a very cliche Chinese story, which is made for 15 year old kids. So dont waste time on this novel.
This is IET's latest work. It's closer to a wuxia story than a xianxia story like his previous works. Archean Eon Art tells a tale of human unity (so there won't be cliche arrogant young masters or family jealousy being the main plot points like other books). As a result, many of the side characters also grow with our main character in recurring appearances to push this narrative of a cohesive front. Side characters die due to the demon intrusions, and the sacrifices of these heroes leave an impact on our main character, Meng Chuan. Meng Chuan cultivates hard, but he has a guilty pleasure that he enjoys from a young age—drawing. It's a habit his deceased mother had imbued in him. Whenever Meng Chuan is impacted by the happenings around him, he takes in the feelings and processes them before drawing them out as artworks. And this serves to make him stronger.In this world invaded by demons, IET shows us what sacrifice and honor is. IET manages to make you feel for the dead even if they appeared just a paragraph or two ago. He invokes the feelings that we as humans will have when facing a common enemy. He immerses us in heart-pumping action that he has honed for more than a decade.It's definitely a solid, thoughtful, well-written story that you should read.
Until chapter 40 this work was great. However the new translation after chapter 40 is really bad and not worth the money. Kina sad tbh
I think it will be a good read .I am optimistic about this .????????????????☺☺??☺☺?????????????and thats all.
You don’t understand how hard it is to find novels like these. When I read the description I had high hopes for it, Fortunately, it did meet my expectations thank you! Author if you receive hate because of the MC personality please ignore them I love him and you should never chamge him or the writing style. ☺️?
The writing style is direct, and the story has a fast-paced rythm. The author does not spin around the matter and goes straight to the point from the very start. The plot has potential and is very appropriate for the genre, although some events ocurr in a hasty way. A pity that some sentences were left in the past tense, but it's still worth it.
Haven't gotten that far but the author is making edits which shows they are dedicated to the story building and the time behind it. I hope it lives up to my expectations lol
This is written badly. I can't say for sure why. It is normal English, it is not a bad translation like many others, it is just written in a way that I am bored and I am not interested in reading it.It might be that the protagonist is too much interested in girls.It is kinda like this:1. SituationHe is sitting somewhere and googling a girl and the author goes on and on about woman.2. SituationA man is dying, the protagonist is paying attention to the body of the female doctor.3. SituationIt will be decided if he has any chance to attend a certain university which is very very very important to him. All his time before was about trying to get into this university.He is not able to look at the woman who is sitting nearby.But he describes each button on her clothes and speculates about the size of her boobs.I just stopped reading here. It was enough.The author of this story is probably 12 years old and not able to talk to girls without thinking about ***. Ever.
