Very Nice Story
But need to be uploaded faster and more episodes.
Really good ! I love your story.
Nicely written. Love it!
This beautiful story is fun to read th kids are perfect and funny. Love that they are main characters. In the story. Just love the kids. Hope they get to stay active throughout the story. to the end.
loved it, gg on with the nxt bk. Amazing work, author...
Hiro is best version of zinedine.....
Nice story.
Plot and style was very promising just need some revisions and it'll be perfect.
There’s lots of annoying mistakes of such they’re their you’re your and so forth. Urgh! Anyway, I love how the story runs smoothly with less drama. AND I THOUGHT O WAS PREGNANT WHILE THEY’RE IN BOSTON?????
I am very happy to see a rebirth story that is not 100's of chapters long! I can't wait to start this one!
Every chapter makes me more excited about the story
Great read! The end felt a little rushed and I would have liked to have read more of Theo & Allistar. Overall, I enjoyed it very much.