simply time waste ,its been more than 1900 chapters and still the main character is struggling.In my opinion it will take more than thousands of chapters when the Character will become so called mighty cultivator.I am very disappointed by the authors, there are a lot of stupid events just to earn enough money,very slow pace novel.Not recommended
I really like the main character, Mayar, his charisma, kindness, and leadership skills really do help in making the things that the boys accomplish not seem too unrealistic. I've also noticed that your writing has greatly improved since the beginning. It seems you've gained some confidence and have a clear end goal for the novel. The only thing I would suggest is giving the other characters more screen time because right now everything seems to revolve around Mayar. It makes liking the other characters difficult. Other than that one complaint, I am greatly enjoying the novel and hope for many more chapters!
A pleasurable masterpiece, with a well-arranged story, developed, the character design splendid, well thought out updating stability and a fitting background.
Well written and interesting. I do not usually care for first-person stories, but this is happily an exception. The characters are interesting, the world is well-thought out, and the mystery is building beautifully. Looking forward to seeing where this will go!
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I read until chapter 12 and I couldn't go over it, the characters are just annoying, like all of them, some of which, if were my irl friends, they would get a punch in the gut, like I can't say too much about it since I didn't even read half of the available chapters, but like with this first impression that I had access to, it's not that good of a read
Im genuinely convinced everyone who reviews and comments on these stories are bots. The world development is bad. The author throws at ranks, names and areas without telling us anything about what they mean and if he does the meanings he gives are things you could tell from a educated guess. " its big" "because they're evil and not righteous". I havent gotten far enough to see much character design vecause i stopped at chapter three. But even then it was so bad, it wasnt like they were people or characters, more like the authors inner concersation with himself, and i didnt even mention yet it seems like when the characters do speak its just them talking about how great their sect is. How great their cultivation is, etc. And thats not even the worst part. The grammar is horrendous. The first chapter wasnt bad but was annoying to read. The second chapter was worse but you could still read it. The third chapter however? Just in the first quarter i pointed out around 10+ errors. I gave up at that point bc i would never finish the chapter of i kept going. So im just going to end it here. I wrote this so someone else hopefully doesnt get tricked by the false reviews that say the story is amazing with nothing wrong with it. Knowing webnovel my review might be pushed down so no one sees it or even removed. But to those who do see and read it. If you can stand a horribly written story that seems to be a translation(not sure about it yet) then go for it. If your not, and your like me. You could check it out but i wouldnt reccomend it, unless by the time you read this the author gets a proof reader and someone to fix all the errors that plague the chapters.
Good story hope you don't drop it .
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