You drop this?
Great start, beautiful characters. I'd love to see where this is going
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This book is full of excitement and adventure. The dynamic of the world is so interesting and unique. I am genuinely so excited to see what the story leads to next and to experience more of this fantasy world.
Super cooooool???❤️, main character is op and nice novel and i am not like mc sister over all performance in book Is good. And I am very satisfied with mc and co character mainly those supportive roll
It contains Poison (Check chapter 30), anyone who came for the villain tag should avoid it but to other readers it's a solid story until the point I stopped.
bro update please or you are dropping it
It is unfortunatly very bland. after mc initially fights back against bullies after getting stronger he just doesn't do anything... based on his background he should be filled with anger and thoughts of revenge.. but nope. nothing. everyone who bullied him, teachers who ignored it, parents who underfed and completely ignored him, brother who despised him. nothing. no mention of his emotions/plans. Additionally, there is no drive to grow stronger quicker by seeking out opportunities to absorb mana from people (bullies would be the prime targets, and he could do it outside of school avoiding the excuse of a teacher detecting it) or by getting his hands on beast cores. mc is content with living a normal school life and working a normal part time job to pay the rent. thus we just get normal school arc, taking classes, small duels and stuff. all this while an actual tournament arc is looming in the distance, which I cant imagine will be any better.Bland is the best word I can think of to describe it. With that said, the premise and writing quality is good and the story is by no means irredeemable if author better explores the emotional side of the mc. Either by having him use his newfound powers to get revenge (I feel like it would be reasonable for a kid in his situation to let the power get a little bit to his head and walk down a darker path) or by clearly motivating to the reader why this isn't happening, maybe he is struggling with such feelings but is able to hold the back.
Right first things first: so far there are only 8 chapters out not counting the prologue, but from what I have seen so far, I am pretty impressed. The main character has plenty, and I mean PLENTY of room for character development and growth. The world seems intruiging, and from what (very little) I have seen of the magic system it seems… at least to have some thought put into it. There is no system, which is nice, but it also means the magic system is much harder to pull off. The plot so far seems interesting, but it could dramatically crash and burn as working in the mechanics of a softer power system, like there seems to be, can leave all kinds of plot holes. I am really excited for this book and hope it will be at least as good as the author’s other one, which I have been enjoying so far. Oh and Mr Author; if you do put 18+ content in there please make sure it is in a self contained chapter that doesnt affect the story? Thanks
If you like his other works and you are a football fan then you gonna like this. Bro don't miss. Just hope that the MC doesn't win everything from the get go.
This story is really good. The premise is very unique and the weiting is really good. I think story can become truly great and hopes the author keeps writing
The female lead is a strong character and so far I can sense an enemies to lovers troupe. I hope the author meets our expectations, the review might be early but I have confidence the author will deliver properly