Said extract is ambiguously canon as it was the original ending that I wrote for the novel as early as before volume 1 was even completed and I would rather not have it collecting dust in some virtual shelf.
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SORA : Ah haa haaa haa... barely finished..... haa haa.....
"That's a lie".
Its a beautiful and moving story i really like it how i wish that theres an update today ??? congrats the plot is not common very unique.
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Its a good kind of slow-burn story. as it goes on you'd see setups that the author has planned in advance. It's a good book to get lost in, and with time it just gets better. I highly recommend it to those who want a good read. I only hope that by the time I catch up on the chapters, the story is ready to go. cheers!
Lackluster. The chapters are monotonous, there are more dialogues and system prompts than actual storytelling. The worldbuilding is confusing. The author does not have a satisfying vocabulary, he keeps saying "the fog makes the world gloomy" every two chapters or so.Not worthy a read.
I'm not very good with words to describe what I wanted to say about this novel so bear with the rant below, but this is just a massive power trip with no character development. ITS BADthe author made fake reviews there's isnt really anything good about this besides it being a gigantic power trip, the mc was just a office worker history nerd who has never fought or used weapons but all the sudden hes a god at the bow and can kill higher level enemies in one hit.....I got to the point where he enslaves his 1st goblin and says he wants to make a kingdom of peace which I dont get. There isnt really any character development too it's like the slaves he killed the second after they asked then enslaves a goblin, THEN makes a declaration of want to make a kingdom of peace, What's the reason?????
I have read 70 chapters and i do think tyis story has potential it was just written by sime one who sucks at the most basic parts of writing. If the author bothered to go back and correct his many obvious mistakes and stoped deleting peoples post because they leave a bad review then this could be on par with some great novels like world of worlocks. Some things he does wrong is:1. The way he writes makes me think English is is not his first language. Which is not the problem the problem is he writes so 1 dimensionaly , MC is an ideot that flip flops me then a fish out of water. Dies because of wrandom woman .Promises to live for himself no others. Transports to another world . Gains powers at a stupidly fast wrate .Bumps into wrandom whore gives out precious knouledge about fire for free. Now ***** is never mentioned again. 2. There is no structure he pretends to be careful but, he is as arigent as they come. Does not do basic reserch about brand new world. Ok about killing human for no reson after 1 command from the principal at a school. Should have 0 fighting experience but Does not matter cuz he 1 shot everyone. No one has escape ability despite the people he is fighting are hundreds of years old.3. Super easy to become a god he does not need to train meditate , explore , get good equipment. Demi god stronger then mid god him. His chess philosophy is super lame i liked his old powers better. 4. Gods who have lived hundreds and thousand of years are stupid like pre-pubeant ****. When he is on adventure because he is at mid god leven and arthur is only now how there is no one else in story to give an F about he ads more 1 dimensional mid god beings who tell u ****ty background ove campfire. Insted of being mysterious and all incompassing instead of acting like a lvl 10 adventure group. There are many problems this is just the tip of them i just hope Arthur fixs them so story can actually be good.
Hey great book! But I think some parts such as chapter 1 and 2 are a bit rushed i think. I think if u slowed down a bit and extended the story by explaining the emotions and monologues, it would make the story even better and worth reading. If me as a reader got an insight to the Demon child's mind it would make the story even better. It just a suggestion for the future chapters. Thanks!
I'm enjoying the novel ngl?. buh the updating tho ? it's tiring to wait so long