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Overall it’s really great .Really recommended it’s not unique I mean there’s a lot Novel that has similar to this but this one It’s really captivating. The world background are really explained well you’ll really know how to imaginary the how things work.character and mc all great there’s nothing much to say ,you can tell when you read it it’s really great especially the characters it reflect to mc’s actions if they are trash then slaughtered if they fine as gem then he take care simple as that.progression or development is really the main factor about this story it’s not forced and had way to much progression which is good since it’s not that had much fast pace also not slow as well . Overall its enjoyable.
Fucking great, I love everything about it, the only downside is that there isn't more of it! Warhammer for the win! What more do I have to say to get to this fucking 140 word limit?
The concept is good. This story could be great but it's somewhat unreadable. The author keep changing perspective that breaks the immersion. and keep using 1st person and 3rd person. Please choose one and stick with it.
Well, the idea was good.. kind of.3 1/2 chapters in, and it was already kind of unbearable. It just seems like you have no clue what you’re doing, and need some time to improve.You want the main character to be sarcastic so bad that it just comes off as cringey, and this whole thing where the boys and school are picking fights over a girl, and even crying when they see her with the MC is quite honestly just gross, and unrealistic.
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Chapter 350 and stopped. This is to tiering for me! No villains die and all of them are making the MC piss his pants when they appear (even though he has knowledge beyond everyone else).His idea of cunningness and steeling is nice but never used properly, when he has great moments next time he speaks of his ass making enemy just for the sake of the plot.Here women are literally all h***s (one admits that she f***d around 1500 guys in 5 years!) and every woman is either raped or she is selling herself just for some money or titles. Not to mention that more than 50% of the novel is about f****g women. Even she-bears from the wiled are abducted and f***d. Nothing is spared. This bullshat is so annoying that even when people fight, one guy who trains is p****s every day lifting heavy metals whit it so he could f***k more, uses his p***s to fight and his subordinates to f***k themselves so he could enchant people around him whit erotic thought.As for the MC, he is spinless and when everyone fucks around him, his bullshat`s women his training his yang so he can`t sleep whit them only to be rape by a slot who had f***d someone for 2000 years and got bored so to make jealous her man, she rapes our MC and tells him that she was the last man on this planet she would f****k but becouse she got borde she had to do and now, everyone knows she was raped by him and he his hunted by the most heroic and brave hero in this world who got cuckholded.There are chapters (and a big number of them) where I felt I was ready about different novels mostly because this persons who are all enemies of the MC are big influence people from Chinese stories so to fully understand waths going on, either you have to read on the wiki or make assumptions what the heck is going on because the complex motives behind there actions. (of course complex motive all end in being either mother ****ed or wifes raped and so on).Not to mention, MC cried desperately and complains his all alone in this world, where not long ago he swore brotherhood whit so many people, who despised he wants power, he uses it on his new friends to level them up.Another annoying thing, here everyone after killing, raping and doing despicable things, trying to kill MC every second, are all forgotten once the arc is settled, where most of the guys survive for a cheap reason. There are many other irritating things that make my hair stand but I'm too tired to writhe it down.Not to mention, MC has killed many innocent people but at some point, he arrogantly stands out for a prostitute making the entire story seem so cheap that makes me puke.Of course, there are also good things in it and one of them is side charters have some charm and development, ill try to give it a change later but from the way I see it, much won't change. I even suspect his love interest would go NTR on him, on how much NTR is in this story. Not saying it yet it happened but how lame the MC is acting, I can see it happen.
Sadly, just another virtual game novel with a simple minded MC and OP skill. Somehow a system is also pulled out of the author's behind to conveniently explain the MCs OP skill. Not worth your time.
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Really enjoying this book so far. Hope it gains momentum and moves up the rankings. .
The story itself is not bad, it's a bit of a different take on your typical VR story.I'm personally just not a fan of the POV changes, the Family dynamic or the long traveling arcs. But that's more a personal preference than a criticism of the story itself. A major thing that bugged me is the lack of line brakes like : --------- or …......... for a new POV shift or the transition from Game to real-world, it is not necessary but it makes reading much simpler. An other point is the lack of reason, i didn't get a clear backstory of the MC or most of his family, 61 ch. into the story and we basically don't know much of why he is doing what he is doing. Was 5 years into the future really so bad ? What is his motivation? Without at least a better driving force it feels like the MC is just a kid that plays the game and makes a bit if money nothing more. And last but not least, the mental Age of the MC . How old is he exactly? The way he handles his Family issues make me think that he is mentally no older than maybe 20. That isn't in line with someone who has gone thru hard times and lost his family. But all in all upuntil this point the story is good, it's more my personal preference that is a bit different and I enjoy his actions in the game more than any of the IRL interaction he has. will read more the next few days. 4/5 stars
Whoa! Really a unique style of writing, I must say, this is my first time reading this kind of fantasy genre and it was super intriguing. The way you describe the scenes are lit and yes, even the plot itself is interesting. I would recommend this book to all Fantasy lovers! Enjoy, and thank you Author!