Read it through enjoyed it very much can’t wait for you to come back to continue writing this book it’s flowing pretty nicely so far can’t wait to see what’s to come in a few months if you’re back
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Hey author-san did you drop this novel?? I want to know what the mc do with his mother
Since I hear one of my titles, I give you five stars, may you reach the Nirvana Stage, trust me it took me 500 years of being imprisoned to reach that ****ty realm, and remember to knock down the Jade Emperor a couple pegs.
Idek what the author is thinking. Huge problems all over. The description and the actual story and totally different, the mc gets b rank ability, and the percentage is 10%. The highest the level the novel says is sss (says f-sss) the system mentions ssss+ (the system created the +). There are people in the MC’s class who got abilities of a lower grade than himself, but for some reason b grade abilities seem to be trash in this world. The fl for some reason singles out the MC staring at her after she gets her ability, and like others said, everyone else should be staring at her too. Someone in the comments said that the fl tried to cheer mc up about his ability being low grade and he just completely ignores it (not the grade of ability that matters, but how you use it and the effort you put in) most of this stuff happens in the first 3 ch.
Great story, loved reading it from beginning to end. I highly recommend reading this first before reading the upcoming sequel for any new readers.
I like your story though at first i didn't like it based on reviews. it is decent story. though i feel sometimes i feel you are trying to make things too complicated at times. another problem in my opinion is your slow pace and due to which it can't be enjoyed in this webnovel chapter format. Yours is i think something to be read in bulk like after 5 or 10 chapter. Overall i like it. I think it is right balance somewhere between extremes of all wish fullfilment stuff where everyone worships mc and the other extreme where anything and everything goes wrong for mc. Yours characters also feel like people though mostly shitty though that is mostly real life things i guess. Everyone isn't a shounen character. though sometimes it goes too grimdark, i guess. Like everyone has something dark about them them. Also you should gauge your story every now and then between realistic stuff and entertainment for which most people come to read a novel. Too much wish fulment type novel get stale pretty soon but too realistic also have problem of not always being entertaining. Though best of luck.I will follow your writing.
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The character design and the frequent updates are a definitely good and the way he built the background for the world was good as well, the names are definitely better than what I've seen in most novels.
Hello, this is the author of The Mech Touch, and I'll shamelessly review my own story to provide some clarification.This novel is my original work and I'm writing it as I go. My goal is to write a webnovel with the consistency and quality of Qidian's mainstay stories. This means that I will do my utmost to keep up a regular updating schedule and upload chapters with decent word counts without detrimentally affecting its quality. I have a decade-long history of writing fanfiction and have published about 800,000 words in a dozen different stories, so I'm an old hand at this. I know more than almost anyone else what readers demand from authors, so I will work hard to meet your expectations.The Mech Touch is a story that I came up with a whim, but found it good enough to start writing immediately. I wanted to write an engaging sci-fi mech novel but from an original premise. Incorporating a 'System' into the story might be a cheap and overused plot element, but its fun and it works for the audience of this website.
A one-sided love always hurt. I hope Vanessa will find the courage to let him go
Good book ...