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MC's extreme distrust is getting on my nerves so much I want to kill him, he's putting off everything even strength just because he doesn't trust system. bro you will die first before the system does anything to you if you keep on being so dumb. Secondly, interactions with characters arent really logical, it seems quite forced. they don't really think into things. Harold is too cowardly for the first half, but good thing he still tried to save his wife. Thirdly, too much fights and all of them are very long, I'm now around 30 chapters and the whole thing is just fighting and nothing else, even adventure is very short and plain, no relaxation at all, it's as if I'm watching a 10 hours long Naruto fights compilation. we can't be so tense the whole few hundred chapters, that's not novel, that's torture.Fourthly, MC is too bloodthirsty and doesn't think about using terrains to fight, he also attacks someone that he knows could kill him without even talking it out, just say that you want to end things peacefully, u haven't even killed anyone from each side yet.Fifthly, some forced plots are too obvious, should think of lengthening the plot and adding more points instead of directly going into it and forcing everything.sixth, this is just my preference. it's fine if you want to add mystery and all that, but at least let us know basic things gradually and not just put fights without going into mysteries.
Haven't read but the synopsis is intriguing but is the summoner really a woman? Not really against it but based on the type of stories I've seen and the fact this is Chinese the woman might turn into the love interest real quick who the protagonist simps so much I hope my assumptions are incorrect though and that this would turn out quite good
Story is good, please realise more chapter???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Almost impossible to put down. In a quest for love, the world changes. With a lot of twist and turn, the writer wasn't confused of where the story was going?
16chapters but the MC is still trash with no cultivation . he can make pills that is useful why not use them ? bad. hmmm. so bad. . you should have made the MC cultivation around chapters 5+.. NO cultivation = improvement. you are just wasting chapters to make filler or trash story
So very interesting and Worth a reading of few chapters to test if good? So I am reading this novel so everyone who wants something to read should try too!!? This story is pretty good from what I see of the others reviews I’ve read of the story and the summary alone. I’m reading this for sure!! keep chapters coming ???
I love how you designed the characters. Most of the time our lives change but if we don't take control life ends up changing us sometimes even to all sorts of worst kinds. You got everything well portrayed. Keep it up!
Today's chapter is better the then the last one in my opinion, well I liked the forbidden fruit part mostly. Yuan was excited from the excitement that his fantasy will nw became a reality