Writing a review for the fp, seems interesting from the synopsis though, I'll probably give it a shot
This is neither good nor bad. There are simply not enough chapters to decide whether it's either of those.
Please I want more chapters the wait is unbearable
Really came as a surprise and really should be more popular.MC is a very pragmatic character and willing to go far for his goals. not just in the sendse of killing but he uses cunning, tactics and trickery too.it's a bit fast paced but not enough to give whiplash.overall a great read
I have to say that this world the author has created is really, really interesting. It's the type of story that makes me want to see it in the visual medium. Always while reading a chapter I am trying to visualize everything. And to be able to make the reader want to visualize is the proof of how invested they have become in your story. Hera, in the first six chapters, has been very well written out and set up for further character development. Few people characterize their MCs in the first few chapters and many who try to do it are not able to very well. This is one of the rare examples of stories where it is done well and that just adds so much more to this story.For a book that is more about world-building (at least that's what I understand from the description), you have created an excellent stage to further write.A very solid read that I'd recommend people who like world-building to definitely try. Good work, Author!
The story is good. You just cant stop reading
the synopsis was really intriguing I want to know more
I typed a book review for my event mission.
I have nothing to say other than it's AMAZING. Is it the Story progression? Cultivation levels? Weapons? Battle descriptions? MC's love life? Romance and Sex scenes? Suspense, Thrills and Mysteries? Basically everything in this novel is great. Although there are minor writing errors here and there, the book is still very much entertaining.Keep up the good work dear author. Don't stop writing. And don't forget to keep safe.
This novel is pretty good with a prudent MC. Although he is good but not naive. Isn't arrogant and knows what to do in a troublesome situation, knows when to bow his head and knows when to shut his mouth. It's actually a quality rarely seen in 'MC' generally. The world building goes in depth and even shows how fruit seller markets work. The important side characters that I've seen till now do have different personalities and have differences. Butler, maids, his friend, etc. Try first 10-15 chapters, I'm pretty sure you'll like it.And yeah, MC doesn't look like a skirt chaser yet.
This story is so high quality, I feel a little awkward reading it here for free. This can easily be sold as a book. It shows a xianxia world where strength is everything and cultivators treat normal people like dirt. It's quite gritty and dark at times, specially at the beggining, but after +100 chapter I think it's more apt to call it 'realistic'. The story and its characters were built with care and a lot of work, and it shows. All in all, highly recommended to any who can stomach it.
The story has improved every time, although there are still errors in grammar, at least it has improved a bit. Thank you editors! ??? It has chapters with a lot of information, I think the author is in a hurry, although the last chapters have returned to normal. Being slower and softer, like at first! I'm going to change my assessment now that it already has more chapters. ??Love It! ???