[If your wrong about this Undine… I will curse you in the next life!]
The large student slapped the muscular boy on the shoulder.
Carla "so this is the new addition to the family" Carla took leo while Liam looked as if a thief robbed him off all his treasures.
duike:shang'a how can you do dis to me! what's so good about that dragon he's
Can already tell this is garbage just by the title. Not sure what kind of delusions you had to think that any normal person would enjoy a novel where the main characters fantasy is to have a harem. A harem is completely fine, but when his main aspiration is to have a harem, he’s just become a perverted loser who—in reality—would never receive a woman’s touch.
very interesting concept! please continue
Shaping up to be a good story. Don't let any mean comments get you down as you continue to write. Over time, everything will fall into place. My only advice is trying to not make the MC too overpowered too fast, or the side characters too mindless or uninteresting.All in all, keep up the good work ?
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Warning! this is a story for only indians.it started well until chapter 150 where the author started being biased on all other religions calling it man made, he goes to the length that he even put the Mc rewrite The quran and the bible. shrug i mean did he takes all Muslims and christian to have low iq that they will accept a book founded in a cave and started believing that it is the real one because it is written in the same language as that religions and suddenly all the world started believing it, the mc even started executing (murdering)the old Muslims just for the old one to be forgotten,if not a tyrant then what( even the prisoners and withnesses where murdered to clear all evidence.). and the thing about dharmic islam and christian make it worse that why i said this is a novel only for indians. if the holy books where easily tempered with then many emperor in the world would have put their names in the book as prophets or something.
It's honestly generic as hell, I tried going pass the arrogant young master/arrogant people trope but there's to much. I went atmost to chapter 15 good luck if this is you're type of book.
This story updates slowly, but consistantly. It is meant to be a funny read and the author manages to pull it off. We have a male protagonist still denying his homosexual tendencies (but nevertheless acting on it), a beautiful ML and as the best side character - a system which is clearly a fujoshi, torn between getting the host back in character and cheering him on. Oh, and for the readers of Touch of irony: The crow is back! :D
good start, the story in brief is a copy of the boku base in the hero (what is not a problem) with elements of wuxia? xianxia in the 'current' world, with system.the world configuration: the world is 30 years advanced, but instead of society and the world evolve, they regress. the general morality degrades and returns to the point where the weak is ruled by the fort, why? because yes, it does not have a good esplicaçao, the author says that it has powers can do the work of ten, but the works that only require of a person? besides that because ALL abilities are useful for ALL departments? alias people who are impotent (have little chance of awakening their power, or based on what the system said have conditions difficult to complete) are discriminated and has no value, because? because EVERY worker has to have a power, why? because ALL powers are useful or are used to cultivate, and of course no one would care about the rare powerless ... what can they contribute with simple jobs or with science ?? 2000 years of history and scientific advances, medical, spatial, political and social struggles, do not count ?? Hahaha (laughs) Of course not, are you an idiot? Why would they differ?the story: the protagonist lake is a genius and has little chance of losing his power (impotent), so all his "friends" abandon him and he learns to live in solitude ignoring the speeches of others (ok, good incincio dark the way that I like) and continues to train with the resources (what resources and what they serve? not explained) that her mother works hard to achieve, and to reciprocate her for the sacrifices she makes for him, he goes to a low level school (even though he could go for a much better one) to escape from his former classmates, even though they apparently ignored him or spoke ill of him (what should he have learned to ignore ...?), in the low-level school he meets Gregory Chor the son of a great family that controls incredible and exact 15% and his gang that beat him and mock him for being imposing and he, with his incredible intelligence, comes to the conclusion that to revoke would bring consequences for himself and his mother and that the school could come to weaves it (because he cares enough to offend a child of a large family, why? because yes), but of course he does not let that up, and he makes an ironic comment in front of Gregory and the gang, who immediately beat him to break his bone and leave him unconscious, and then gregory has a great idea !! he knew a hole in the city wall (very safe city), how about taking him from school to the forest and leaving him 10-20 minutes from the city for him to be killed by the beasts? Hmm? Someone to stop me, to keep someone unconscious in the city? the protagonist wake up ?? Beasts attack us ??? blame for killing someone ???? Of course I'm not from a big family, so? success, we killed him. so the system appears at the right time to kill the beast who was about to kill lake and heal it and any injury, he wakes up and is surprised by the situation and returns to the city and denounces gregory by the obvious attempt of murder? or warn you about the hole in the wall? of course not, he is the son of a large family that controls 15% of the city and that there are no enemies to support the protagonist and decrease the influence of the family, and of course that he goes to school and with his intelligence, perception and senses (he is also in the school of low level?) and nothing happens there, he returns home and discovers the system that tells him to unlock his ability he has to reach the copper esper 5 , as a reward for having completed the tutorial the system of a very rare method of cultivation of high level that all the great families would kill to have, however that is very difficult to learn and to use and the initial part could take 1 year, it spends 30 minutes to start spinning the technique, it has to be said that a medium sper would take several days to begin to understand and begin to actually cultivate, and in 8 hours of cultivation it breaks the fireplace in which it was trapped for a while and increases So much your stats,I stopped reading here, the next chapter is called spar and I think gregory will come to give problems and lake ira beat him disregarding the safety of his mother and the princess (which he bumped) will help him with his problems and he will help her find out her problem (for her to be in a low-level school there must be a problem) and conserve that same problem maybe even sharing her method of cultivation and she will prove to be an incredible cultivator and be taken away from return to his family to farm or house it with another large family and so on.finally the story is predictable with elements xianxia too and with the protagonist growing fast of more and great families idiots and too influential etc.