great read but i feel like i read this before somewhere….
My first story about A-B-O. My breakdown. Good writing with excellent flow and immersion. The characters are not flat but have some flesh. Not very erotic, but that's probably my Cis talking. Good job. Definitely reminds me of that song Self Esteem by The Offspring. I think I just dated myself. ??
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
So far 400 chapters in it is good but as soon as he gets manipulated by woman i’m dropping it. Eastern authors have an authority complex with MC , as soon as a woman commands them they jump.
Just read the synopsis, and I have added this story for review under my own collection of criticism.The synopsis has many inconsistencies that hopefully will be addressed in the actual novel, but if not, I shall point them out in my own book.
this is probably the worst book I've ever read it seems like it would have a good story if it was balanced and written correctly...sorry....
Lol this novel is busted. Mc becomes rediculously overpowered and an amazing fighter overnight………………………………….
The story has been fantastic so far. I like the direction and speed of the actual plot. Definitely recommend this to all readers...But need more chapters author-san~
Honestly, a very well written start for a Virtual Reality story. I 100% look forward to this book. Better than 95% of the novel on webnovel just based on the first few chapters.The story has a unique MC, Side-Characters, and plot. Truly see great possiblities from this book. Just make sure to update more ;)
The story is initially intriguing, and no flaws were particularly obvious for at least 50 chapters or so. After that... well maybe the author had a sufficient following and got careless?There are a number of instances that are tiresome but bearable; the almost obligatory "China #1" plugs, frequent contradictions in his descriptions of incidental motivations or consequences, the logical flaw in "completely conquered people are more loyal than allies" (until they believe they have a chance at rebelling, obviously).What finally made me drop the book was the unfortunately common theme of "strong willed MC turns into putty in front of (in this case random) pretty women
This novel description seems very much interesting ?? and it even a new kind of a novel...................................................................
You will regret not reading novel as its a masterpiece author has written great characters and novel plot flows very nicely and as long as the author continues like this his novel will be one of the best