How I wish steady update and a long novel, for sure the story is a source of my happiness
"Hey there, awesome readers! ?So, I finally decided to start writing a novel (cue the dramatic drumroll ?) and let me tell you it’s been a wild ride already. This is my first attempt, so yeah, it’s probably not perfect... but hey, we all gotta start somewhere, right?Think of this as me showing you my literary baby. It might stumble and fall, but with your thoughts, feedback, and maybe a little gentle roasting (be kind, please ?), I’m sure I can make it better! I’m here to learn, laugh, and improve, and I hope you enjoy the process with me.So go ahead, dive in, share your opinions, and let's make this story one for the ages! ?Thanks for being here—you're the real MVPs!"
I really love the effort put into developing charollette aka Avery. Added to my library and waiting for updates.
There are some gender pronoun mess ups, and sometimes author gets their characters mixed up. The issue that caused me to stop is the Mountain pile of crap dumped on the MC within the first months of starting this journey. I was fine with the noble family and then some dangers at the sect in the future. But we have already wiped the nobles and have now dumped 2 World level adversaries on our fresh new MC. He has already had to be saved by his alter all powerful ego once.. One of the big bad villains just beat his master and the family he was with.like ants.. Unfortunately piling this level of adversaries on a new MC ruins the story IMO, it sucks the joy out as MC is always one fart from being destroyed. The other thing is the constant beating a dead horse that he needs to reach grand master root to unlock towers and system is worse than the 4 year old doing "are we there yet?" So sad I was really enjoying this read till this.
just started reading this book now hope it's good .
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Good, story is good everything is good and if you like cold strong smart mcs give a read and hopefully is good enough to stand the passage of more chapters… since the others didn’t even make it past 20 *cough* keep up the work
The last lines and few passages in between are jumbled. Its breaks the momentum of the reading. But the story plot in itself and the way the characters grow is brilliant.
Not bad, but the fact that Mc is so OP and has trillion year worth of knowledge except the author is an inconsistent ... doesn't help. Like, bruh, the usage of mana stones is just bad, using superior stones on things that shouldn't exist at Mc current stage/location. Why the hell does a town/city have a staff that is op. When the background of the city makes it seem like it is pretty weak. Is this city supposed to be like that stupid op village trope that all Chinese game novel has. There are other plot holes, so many of them. Honestly sad, but it makes sense. Mc may be op, but the author is for sure not op nor smart enough to write such a plot.
Very good novel so far . I hope the author does not drop it very interested where the story goes also binge worthy novel
Such an interesting story with lot of secrets something quite different and interesting just waiting for the new plot bts to find about the girl and if she already had a boyfriend then how and with whom she will fall in love love this one
From the little I read, I think the story is slowly building up to something interesting