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In a nutshell its a tree being a simp and not caring about his loyal devine beasts because he is too busy being lustful and idiotic the system should just abandon him and find another host
Good start. Hope the novel gets even better later and the MC actually cares about others, of course not too much ?. Waiting for him to learn more awesome inner force skills and also upgrade his black fury skill to a decent level. What is the cause of all the supernatural/paranormal incidents?
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Plot= full of holesCharacters = inconsistent and doesn't make any senseWriting quality= full of grammatical errors borderline low grade writing
One of the few well written novels I have read on here. The plot and background didn't take too long to set up the story but was well done. Unlike others that take 20 chapters to world build which could be done in considerably less amount of chapters. Highly recommend.
Too complicated to enjoy. and the plot heh?? is a joke. Even after 200 chapters there hasn't been any substantial movement of the plot.....
The story might be somewhat the same as the others but it is good on its own way. It is not that good in some area such as the translations and editing but try reading it for fun or to kill time not by finding faults at it.Btw. Don't mind my word construction in this review. I'll admit I am not good at it.??
Great story so far. Has gotten really repetitive at this point. Gets skill book, arc becomes about skill book. Conflict ensues, Zhang Ye face smacks. Rinse and repeat. Still great story but 700 chapters is only 6 months. I mean really, you have done all of this in that time frame LMAO. Worth the read and one of the better books on this site.
I must say that eversince this novel has been featured in the main page (today), it instantly gained a lot of recognition.. and got a lot of comments, votes and reviews.. and I’m grateful for it..It’s just unfortunate that I find it hard to adjust the novel in accordance with some of the comments and suggestions as the chapters have already been built a bit far so much so that a little change could impair some portion of the plot..But to the rest of the recommendations, I’ll be sure to find a way to include them in the future chapters—especially those that I failed to foresee as I write the chapters daily.. so rest assured that many of your questions will be answered in the future..So keep on reading.. Thanks a lot for all the comments, votes and reviews.. they will definitely be helpful to improve the story..Qairi
Classic bad faceslapping cultivation novel. Theres nothing remotely unique or interesting about it. The people don’t question how a talentless dude suddenly became talented and instead they go with the flow like all bad novels
You can do it, girl... Good work, Author!
I love this book. I do love when there is more than 1 chapter cause I lose interest if it's too slow. I'm team Jackson all the way. I just hope Ariel and Jackson mark each other soon. As for Luca, there's something that's off about him, I just don't know what!
