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really good start. The background is good. The grammar is also good and the story is very interesting. If you continue like this I will be your number 1 fan.
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Descriptions are amazing! Even though I'm not a military fan, there's a very clear image within my mind.However, do note that most webnovel readers enjoy short and snappy paragraphs to quickly read though.Looking forward to more from this author!
it started off with a lot of potential the characters had an okay development, the story kept a good pace, and the power levels generally meant what was shown, but as time progressed the author began to pay less and less attention to his own world contradicting his own statements. additionally the power levels slowly became meaningless to the point where Alec and his group begin fighting not only with a tier 5 as a group of low tier 4 and tier 3s with alec and his golems being low tier 3s or lower, but a tier 5 with a time element when alec was literally told point blank by the system which has never been wrong that even a mid tier 4 would shatter him even with a low tier 4 ally and his golems just prior to him hitting tier 3. all of this is even before we get into the amount of filler and boring side stories the author pushes into his chapters or the constant repeat descriptions. if i had only read the first 100 chapters I would have rated this much higher, but the issues simply get to great over time. I would have dropped this story after around chapter 250-300 if i hadn't bulk bought chapters but even having paid for chapters up to around 500ish it has gotten so poorly handled that i am stopping by 450ish
I've binge read it and all in all it's fun to read. The overall it just fits my personal tastes when it comes to stories. Early chapters tends to be confusing cause it's still early but over time the writing improved. It's very fun to read.I've read the other works and I can see a lot of improvements. Keep up the good work.
Wow just wow. its been long since I read anything except fanfics but this is a nice change of pace
The MC does not resemble any Young Master of any Qidian or Wuxia Novel I've read soo FarFrom Being excited to disappointed People will alwayz have different tastesBut why Give the MC who already has enough Talent??A God System A God (literally)Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master thingsWhen has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels???You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique....The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for AnythingAll the Young Masters in any Novelhave ambition n do all to make sureTHEIR AMBITION IS fulfilledYEt this Young Master does nothingWith all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 levelWHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators???Why give him a System even The God??Better to remove it allAs a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs
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