Great job, hope you can write more chapters l, thanks for your hard working, keep on, ?????????????????????? more chapters many thanks
So far so good, the grammar is pretty good. Itachi's personality in this novel is believable. I look forward to future chapters. This is worth a read for those who like both itachi and atg!
A very interesting start with a nice twist. It is very refreshing to read a novel about some of the historical figures during the medieval era. Looking forward to the development of this book.Hopefully, it will be able to convey a bit of history and likewise add an additional element to accentuate the progress of the plot.
The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors. Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days?Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting. Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies. Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future? ??I still like the MC tho, got a good impression of him. I like that he's into inventing. The vibes he gave me is kinda like deku of hero academia/ a bit Dean of dark king / and a bit Edward elric?World background: the world after apocalypse + steam punk era. Deserves 5/5 for me.Suggestions? No suggestions haha. Just keep doing this and don't drop it if possible. ✔️Added in my library
Either tha author is an idiot or the translator is a complete troll/idiot. However if you dont take the story seriously reading the free chapters could be a free laugh at how stupid everyone in the story is. 47% death rate for high school graduation is sustainable right? And dont bother teaming with a healer in an event with 47% casualty rate event that would be stupid, healers are the worst. And dont force the healer to join a team because that would decrease everyones chance of survival.Yeah charecters are not very bright in this book. But I found it fun to laugh at how stupid they were.
A lot of BS by this blinded author who can’t seperate reality from fiction failing to create a new viable reality. If you aren’t convincing me then you are failing to give me immersion.BS#1 - And this one is repeated a lot which is the muscle memory. First of all he transmigrated as a newborn not in a random already used body. He had 13 years to fix it and he’s still complaining.BS#2 MC going on tirades about certain theories and naming them then the side characters having no idea who he’s talking about. Then suddenly the next chapter the author still uses names of excercises NAMED after Earths people. Example is Pallof Practices named after John Pallof in his curriculum. The author has no creativity to make new names thats how he ended up with the Martial Apprentice Master Sage travesty.BS#3 MC and AUTHOR narrating how he has a better training methodology than a literal SAGE. How out of touch is this MC and author. This world is literally built on Martial Arts and have sages that can raze countries and he as a 50 yo vegetable thinking he has a better way to practice??! Does that even make sense?BS#4 Him suddenly not knowing what a one inch punch is or lateral running walking then having a chapter long explanation to it in his mind? SO DOES HE KNOW IT OR NOT? So many contradiction and ramblings limited by the authors sight, originality and creativity. It’s very hard to immerse in something filled with plot holes.
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Hi everyone,I made a mistake in chapter 44, it's Liam's POV & not Ace,I have corrected it so once my editor approves it,it will change,you see why I love you my readers,you are always there for me,thanks for the corrections, good reader ... I also sorted out the other complains too,enjoy reading all
Amazing Read!
This author is wonderful! Her books are interesting and she actually updates.
great book.
Loved this book