Good vivid descriptions. I feel like both God and sperm-drop. Just a touch of grammar corrections and a little 'show, don't tell' will make it more readable. 5 stars for the effort and I'm looking up to the future chapters. Salute to you, author!
Whats happening to webnovel. Once upon a time, I looked forward to my Fridays because of the great books that came out every week. As time passed, the quality dropped slowly, but as Webnovel already had all the good books, this was understable. At some point the gems will run out, and you will have to wait for new ones to be made.But nowadays, the quality of the books webnovel are putting out every week are absolute trash.Absolute garbage. mindless plots, tropes and cliches that have been recycled a thousand times over. I would have to go back months to find a batch of books that had a character with the slightest depth to it.Please Webnovel, give us some good books.
The first arc was amazing it captivated me and got me hooked not completely expecting a story like that, however after the first arc the translation went down hill to the point that I can barely read it..
Interesting read my friend yessireee very glad to have discovered this little treasire? its hot everything one would want in a great novel an interesting storyline, great characters that you love to hate and hate to love?..........??? an entertaining read overall?okaayyyeee dokie...sooo yep.....plz keep updating plz, i will read okkkkkk??
I really want this story but im so sad that this novel only have a 300+ chapter. . How long it takes for the continuation of this story? Did webnovel lack of narrator / author for this kind of readings ? However , i looking forward that one day this novel will have a great translator who can give it a good released of chapters and will be able to make it to the next level ... .???
Man this is really good stuff. Not really much else to say though and I need 140. Sigh......................................................
Stylistically, the writing is interesting. It's direct and fast-paced. The story doesn't take a break. If you're into that, this is for you. The writing has a few issues when using tenses and capitalization–but that's something that can be easily fixed with something like Grammarly. Things are a little abrupt, but that's how it is if you want a story that moves very quickly.I'm not sure if this is a fanfiction? lmao the other review's are confusing to me. Overall, this is a story for someone into revenge plots, face slapping, and progression into greater heights (protagonist's ability-wise).Kudos to the author and I hope you continue to enjoy writing!
Hello Fellow Daoist! If you're new, I'm sure you're here in the Review Section to see if the story is actually worth reading, right? Honestly though, the early chapters are really crappy especially Chapters between 1 and 20 or maybe even more. Why? Well, I created this just for fun so I never really had a plot prepared when I started writing this so I just wrote what ever ideas that pops out in my mind. What I didn't expect is that I would actually get a contract for it because you know~..the story was just out of a hobby, right? So to those new readers out there, if you could at least get past maybe around chapter 30 or 40? I could at least tell you that the story slowly gets better and better. After all, I'm just a noob writer with almost no experience in writing novels. And if you read past those chapters that I mentioned above but you think that story is still the same like it didn't even have a change? Then maybe it isn't your cup of tea after all, sorry. Anyway, best of luck to us! ^_^ Peace! / NOTE: For the last time! It was clearly mentioned that weapons bought from the [System] or weapons created after the purging are the only usable weapons and weapons after WWII is a no no. NOTE TWO: You would only comment about modern weapons being a plot hole if you just skimmed or didn't even read the early chapters at all.Important Note: I will delete reviews that just rants about the story flow in the early chapters because it didn't go what they wanted it.Please leave reviews with constructed criticism that points out mistakes in the story where it needs improvement.Keep in mind that the story was only written as hobby before it was contracted, so I just wrote whatever comes to my mind.P.S the Stronghold needed to be built in a place indicated by the [System] on his map, it can't be just built anywhere the MC wanted. God, I'm tired of explaining ****! Just read the fucking whole chapters from 1 to 10, all of it was explained there! So stop being a brat and write your own if the story doesn't go the way you wanted it!
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The plot seems interesting, picking up treasures along the way. Sadly the story starts midway and has a lot of loopholes. The MC doesn't have much brain and follows the usual face slapping routine. On top of that the translation isn't very good. It's a no for me.
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I love the concept and the idea behind the story is unique. Kinda tired of cliche things in a novel so please give us something more unexpected. I hope that the MC will do more badass things in the future too.Keep on going with the writing. Ganbatte!