Avatar-The Mandate of Heaven

The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors. Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days?Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting. Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies. Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future? ??I still like the MC tho, got a good impression of him. I like that he's into inventing. The vibes he gave me is kinda like deku of hero academia/  a bit Dean of dark king /  and a bit Edward elric?World background: the world after apocalypse + steam punk era. Deserves 5/5 for me.Suggestions? No suggestions haha. Just keep doing this and don't drop it if possible. ✔️Added in my library

Lets hope, MC does not go on racism spree all over world.From the name alone it is interesting. First few chapters name are good. But more interesting it is, more worried I am. Chinese authors have  chinese superiority syndrome in them. Lets see how this one goes.

The author dropped the novel don't start it. Don't waste your time with this is a shame but this is how it works in quidian. They drop novels

i like the Book. what where are the next chapters? zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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