"There! Mr. Oh number 12. Can you see him?" I pointed him without stretching out my arms, avoiding to be caught.
Cant wait till he return to original world
There is something wrong with the author. Why does he keep on dragging the story line by exaggerating every detail. The main story would be hardly two lines but the extra lines would be making for the whole chapter. Both Sz and SQ are dumb lovers. Can the author srsly pick up pace and stop with the extra miles. It's iritating.
''What? do you intend to say after bringing up the ancient war huh shen'' A King spoked angierly?
This novel is a masterpiece, this change my life, make me happy now after reading this I have 2 wife and 11 children, my second son has already go to Mecca at 2 month, this novel change my live, thank you author
I'm so sorry to write a bad review, but I found this novel to be really mediocre.I read 26 chapters and couldn't go on anymore as I felt that I was actually wasting my time on it. - The MC is as dumb as a rock. He is truly stupid.- The pacing if the story is messed up, on one hand, the progress with the system is way too fast it feels like it's being expedited, but on the other hand, the actual plot (if there IS one) hasn't really even started yet.- There are some passages that are just awkward and it feels like they were just inserted in the middle of random scenes. like the time the MC is going to buy a house and some random secretary starts feeling turned on lol, don't get me wrong I don't mind smut and erotica at all but the scene felt so out of place. it had nothing leading up to it and no follow up either...- The English is actually decent. I don't remember seeing grammatical mistakes and I'm usually meticulous about that so, although the writing style is average but the grammar is solid. I will not be continuing this novel, but those who like stories like this might enjoy it more than me so I still suggest people give it a try and judge by themselves, and I wish the author much more progress and success in the future.
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An amazing novel don’t drop it please and more chapter ??????????????????????????????????????????
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The story is quite very interesting . Excellent development , good updating stability but for the character development , you can actually do better design and please check for writing errors before posting . Thanks.
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