why author ,it become premium ??????.............................................................why ?.............. ........................
I am really enjoying this story so far. The world building, the pacing, the power scaling are all done really well so far. The characters feel interesting and the mc, despite that he’s now living a second doesn’t seem like some kind of monk with perfect control of his emotions or some ten year old that has no control over themselves. He was only 26 in his other life and didn’t inherit any new memories so his behavior feels accurate. His cheat is definitely powerful, but it’s something that will grow with him over time instead of being so fast that you can’t appreciate all the levels that are skipped over. Overall I really hope this gets picked.
This quote literally turns into the worst one piece fanfic ever after about 70 chapters.Like literally threw out the baby and the bathwater to move over to that trash.
I read the previous version, which I really enjoyed reading. I hope this continues on that path to be able to enjoy it.The only bad thing about this novel would be its lack of chapters, everything else is amazing.
This is Just a Copy PasteIDk why the FK this get pass selection?............................................... .........................
After reading the first 20 chapters of this novel, so far, I enjoyed it. Waiting for more chapters to come. And hoping that this will be picked!
Its a nice read but it neads heawy editing.it's realy raw. There are a lot of details that i cant be sure what it is but if you edit it a bit i can write you a good review.
the writing quality is just very irritating I'm pretty sure this is not someone's first language, which is very clear. the story is,, I don't know really a 50-50 depending on if you like it or hate it me,, I didn't think it was that bad but I definitely didn't like it.
This novel had a good start and even though any trouble is delt with by the system and this novel has no suspense at all, it is written in a way that makes it enjoyable to read.Because the story itself and the characters are very flat the novel focuses on two things. The individual scenes and the reaction of the world around it.The reactions of the world might look nuanced at first, but they are stupidly repetitive at times. Therefore the focus is directed on subtly criticism of the real world school system, education bias and the skewed world fiew of older generations. Simply put, the current school system does not suit the future job marked and living environment. For example, the gaming industry is huge and a great opportunity for those with talent, just like other sports, but we hardly ever see schools support it in the way they support other sports. The individual scenes mostly depend on a summoned character, a famous person from a parallel world. This is were I have to draw a line. The author did not do his research, the people he summons are very famous, but he often has trouble pinpointing the reason for their fame and differentiate it from what they are actually good at.For example: G. R. R. Martin is a famous author, but what made him famous is decidedly not, as stated in this novel, his ability to tell a story from multiple perspectives . Martin is a master of world building and overarching and very compelling story lines. He uses multiple perspectives in his books, mostly because his narrators die often, but it is decidedly not something special to do that and he is not even remotely famous for it. It was genuinely hard for me to think of something Martin is less proficient at, precise and consice descriptions, Martin loves going on long tangents and is kind of infamous for drawing out scenes in his book.I don't particularly like this novel, I really dislike some of the characters summoned and their lack of personality. They mostly feel misrepresented. But I like that the author tries to critique the current educational standards.
A good novel for meMy novel collections1)reverend insanity2)everyone else is a returnee3)fff class trash hero4)omniscient readers view point5)i hate systems
The premise is interesting but the actual story is garbage. MC doesn't just have (almost) unlimited mana, he's also the best at using every skill of every class. This is the case at the start of the story, so there isn't much strength progression, but there isn't much conflict either, other than some faceslapping. All in all, it's like "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
Thank you for writing and sharing this story!