Will75
skip chapter 163 it's a repost of the first chapter. Quality translation, long chapters, lots of legalese, overall a good story so far.
A bit slow on the romance front and the lead male borders on scummy but the author manages to make it funny instead of off putting
I love this novel. The Author did a great job when it comes to story telling. Keep up the good work Author.
yeah it was great recommended
Hi guys it's your author here. This is my first WSA entry and I hope you guys can support it.
I guarantee writing quality, regular updates, no cliches or repetitive content and immersive plot.
ok it's a greatd book and has a lot of potential, but every time i get Hooked. some npc character backstory i dont need the back story of 2 slave traders that are going to die in the next 2-3 chapters. and it's like 5-6 chapter backstory. i can understand a backstory about 1 chapter or less long just to get the general vibe.specially if they are going to die soon. it just stops the flow of the story. it's already switching POV like crazy don't need random background on random NPCS.
i like the duality of the MC and the story so far. it doesn't have too many system window notifications but it's brought up every few chapters.the dream segments are quite annoying, if he's that worried about home then can always use the necklace to see if she's ok....the constant changing of character perspective happens randomly and should flow better.overall the story is good. i enjoy it.
i hate making reviews. too much work.but this book deserves it . at least for me it fits what i like .
i enjoy this novel alot more than i thought i would. the world backfround is interesting and developed and the harem doesn't get boring. the chatacters are all interesting too. I was expecting some super smut filled novel, but I really loved the story and world.
The book is very good. However as you keep going the plot gets more confusing and stuff. Like there's characters with names from DXD, fate, and other stuff. Its not exactly organized much like that fanfic with a person trying to be a evil lord but failing. I would compare this to the arc where the MC was in Eyes Of Heaven. Overall its a decent story
It's unique. It's different. It's a blood filled, system-fuelled, saga. Read this if you like your protagonists to be absolute madman. If you're a weak soul, you probably can't stomach this though.
Fully fleshed out world, complex hero, top notch writing, characters that have their own motivations and don't exist just to further the plot. The plot itself seems way more GOTh than the-chosen-one. This book deserves a lot more attention.
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