I just love the plot story line and the characters it like one of my fav shows i can't wait for more if you are new to reading check out this book 100 percent mostly if you are in to cooking
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A book in the more unknown corners of Webnovel Eternal Thief starts leaving a decent impression on me starting with a very typical start of a cultivation novel that doesn't lean too hard into "HOW DARE YOU TRASH" tropes that Chinese novels tend to start with to try and build motivation for the reader. No, this novel gives you decent story and context for the reader to start becoming invested with the looming idea that the system is coming. The system does arrive with fanfare but the mc is hesitant to accept the cursed power at first showing some actual character. It has easy to understand themes of thievery and despair strewn throughout never asking the reader to deeply invest himself in the story but throws enough out there to keep me interested in it. The world is also rather interesting for a cultivation novel showing the humility to not have humans be ranked #1 in power and building a fully believable world filled to the brim with greedy humans vying to take the #1 in power.The weakest aspects of this story are the author's rare spelling mistakes of certain words like Warrior which he spells as Worrier and also the weakness of the character of the female lead it's not that her motivations aren't explained it's just the author doesn't introduce it the right way (mostly too fast and too reliant on hormones lol) to get me invested in the female lead beyond her attributes (looks, personality, etc.) but these are minor and I have built up a tolerance to this in lew of the things I like about it. Overall I am proud of this author for being able to hit a good bar for his first story
This novel was really good i got hooked after reading about 25 chapters, the characters were designed nicely and this cultivation world was quite interasting, the story development at the start was good in my opinion it was not too fast nor slow for me but others might feel differently, later it increased a little and was a little fast but reasonable so i found it pleasant, there wore some writing mistakes i saw but i didn't mind since it didn't affect me understanding the story but others might not like it. All around it was very satisfying for me and i hope to see many more chapters in the future since i read all the current 130 chapters
I didn't expect this when I decided to read this novel but I loved it. The characters are well described and we can clearly see their emotions through their actions. At least I can.I look forward to it author!
*This just my initial review*okay Mr. Author..the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good..but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter.conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read.example of conversations..MC: "Hello there"*Explanations of something useless or irrelevant*Girl: "hey, how're you"*inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations*that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro..if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less..this is just my opinions.because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same.i dont know, thanks.
Overall a very bad experience, repetitive nonsense all over again, and of course a bland mc that seems to purge the sins of its own author being the absolute manifestation of a weirdo.
Deym... you made a new one? I missed your apocalypse novel man. ?.........................................................................
Disgusting trash where he’s in love with a woman who’s been c*mmed in hundreds of times by his own father, but she just manipulates the MC into thinking she loves him.Absolutely garbage.
i really love this history, need more please...............................................................................................................
Like author mentioned before, inspired from MVS, you will see those touches everywhere. If you've read the great demon system or whatever it's called, it's like a blend between that and MVS. Very similar to those two, combined.The story is interesting, the grammar isn't perfect but you won't find yourself questioning yourself too much. I do hope the MC can become ...less pure, I guess, I know it's supposed to be the angelic system but there can be bad angels too anyways, don't always trust reviews, read it for yourself
Say hello to the one who...Hello!!Are we going to review this?Yes, we are!!Can we just give it 5-star and left?No!!But we just did...LOL!!