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Loved all the 40k stuff, then it went to Cyberpunk 2077 and became garbage.
The synopsis is eye-catching. I loved the way story is written. every scene and every dialogue of the book is gripping and leads to interesting actions. The writing quality is high. Good work author
pretty good so far (ch10)............…......
I really hope the author continues the story. i just started reading it and i am already binging it. it's really good, it's got a realistic charm to an old formula. it's trying its best to be good, and the author is trying hard to give his characters time to flesh out. Thank you pls continue.
I'm already at the latest chapter, 781 and so far it was an amazing year reading this everyday, to anyone who thinks the harem tag is a problem I will tell no it's not.....The author clearly did his researches because the explanation is not BS, very detailed, you will actually learn if you search it up.......the MC is ruthless that's all I can say to him lol, everyone in his harem have their roles, important one , so there won't be a situation where there's not enough screen time or something ....now I'm excited how the MC and his past lover are going to meet, how are they going to recognize each other, are they going to conquer the world ... I can't wait to see..... This is a fun read
Here are the novel's pros and cons. Read carefully before beginning, so you don't end up dissatisfied and angry, because you're more than likely going to rant and I'm going to want to bang my head on the wall. Pros:1. Reincarnation handled well. There is logic behind it and a relevant reason, though it is veiled behind some mystery. 2. Dark themes. This is not a story of good guy saving the world and basking us villains in the light of his noble morals. It is dark (and unfortunately, sometimes edgy) story with things that would offend people of this era. If you're the type to be triggered, do not read. No one is forcing you to. 3. Power couple. The MC and the FMC are extremely unique and possess a trait that makes them stand above all others, together and individually. 4. Overpowered MC. This means no running away from enemies or always being the underdog. More than likely, you will sympathize with the enemies of the MC. 5. Long chapters. Each chapter is 3000 words long, meaning that there is a lot of content in each of them. Sometimes there is fast-paced plot, sometimes there is dialogue and sometimes there are long soliloquies or narration/explanation/exposition in each of them. 6. Non-scripted characters. One-dimensional or background characters do not say the same type of thing or act the same kind of way in every scene. More often than not, they will speak and act in ways you would find interesting.Cons:1. Annoying start. The first 15 or so chapters are 50-50 in terms of preference by readers. I started the novel in Jan 2019, having been off and on with it until August 2019. Those first few chapters have dialogue and actions that are of a typical CN and there are plot elements that might annoy you. After chapter 30 though, every single response I’ve received from readers are approval only, even up to the current chapter we’re on (114). 2. Too many explanations. Sometimes I can abruptly pause the plot to explain what is going on, how it affects the world, the reason why the characters in that scene are doing what they’re doing and other technical details. Call it my own type of filler. 3. Polyamory. There is a power couple and they are linked by fate, but there are other… ‘waifus’ who are there for varying reasons. There is a rule here, that the MC only ‘plays’ with very, very specific ‘waifus’ in the digital world, but is only sexually involved with his soulmate in the real world. Yes, she is aware and has no qualms. Note: This is not a harem. Harem means that there are multiple women who the MC is sexually involved with, and has feelings for. The MC has feelings for only one person and the rest are digital entities who serve one purpose or another. 4. Plot holes. I am not ashamed to admit it, there are a few plot holes in the story. I fixed most of them, but some were so problematic that I had to roll with them. I recently got a story editor, so that was how I even found out. 5. Fewer releases. My release rate is a constant 1 chap per day at the least with no exceptions, but some of you are used to 2-3 chaps a day from other authors. As I said above, I release 3k words a day, and those who release 2-3 chapters either have a length of 1.5k words or 1k words. So really, is there a difference? Here’s what to do before reading Guild Wars. 1. Check the tags.2. Read reviews (both negative and positive, I’ve replied to some of both).3. Clear out assumptions and comparisons in your mind, otherwise you’d be ruining your experience. 4. Keep the mentality of ‘this isn’t realistic’ out of your mind, this is fiction. What is real is what the novel wants to be real. Assess things based on the logic within the story if you truly want to immerse yourself.Enjoy your experience!
Really bad, no plot or interesting scenarios plus quiet a few scenarios are exactly the same as in "First Day in game, i got ten billion from infinite number of check ins". Not sure who copied whom but I dropped the other one too lol
Reviewing this book at 50 chapters and may change later if things change. 1- This author seems to be a master at taking what should be a couple sentences, and rewording it over and over again until it becomes a few paragraphs. Definitely a word count fluffer so far. 2- over use of the word genius, despite misspellings and grammatical errors. It’s hard to really view the MC as a genius, when the word is thrown around for almost every side character as well, and everyone they’re gonna fight. 3- thesaurus crazy. This novel is supposed to be centered around a couple 13 year olds, and a 15 year old. But when you read what the kids are saying, it’s filled with high dollar words left and right like an attempt at writing a doctoral thesis, but these are supposed to be basically kids. Its insanely unrealistic and annoying that the author can’t separate that. The novel being wrote like that is fine, but the characters will never be something we can attach to if they have the same bland tone of overused and several times wrongly used 4 syllable words. 4- simple over explanation. The author took almost half a chapter to explain the idea behind what’s essentially the 1 inch punch. Then immediately followed that with a summarized version, it’s already annoying, and repeating the same explanation multiple ways already has me skipping paragraphs, which isn’t a good thing when the goal is to get people sucked into the novel
A book worth reading. An intriguing plot. Good job!
63 chapters 9/22/23
why does the updates come in slow?