Drop!! ~A Tale of the Fragrance Princess~ (LN)

Reviewing this book at 50 chapters and may change later if things change.  1- This author seems to be a master at taking what should be a couple sentences, and rewording it over and over again until it becomes a few paragraphs. Definitely a word count fluffer so far. 2- over use of the word genius, despite misspellings and grammatical errors. It’s hard to really view the MC as a genius, when the word is thrown around for almost every side character as well, and everyone they’re gonna fight. 3- thesaurus crazy. This novel is supposed to be centered around a couple 13 year olds, and a 15 year old. But when you read what the kids are saying, it’s filled with high dollar words left and right like an attempt at writing a doctoral thesis, but these are supposed to be basically kids. Its insanely unrealistic and annoying that the author can’t separate that. The novel being wrote like that is fine, but the characters will never be something we can attach to if they have the same bland tone of overused and several times wrongly used 4 syllable words. 4- simple over explanation. The author took almost half a chapter to explain the idea behind what’s essentially the 1 inch punch. Then immediately followed that with a summarized version, it’s already annoying, and repeating the same explanation multiple ways already has me skipping paragraphs, which isn’t a good thing when the goal is to get people sucked into the novel

So... how is the harem?  No girls will cheat to the mc, right? Insert one hundred and fifty characters.......lalalalallalalalalalalallalalalalalalla

Well, I  guess this novel is very nice. This is underrated.  The story of this novel is very interesting. . ....???????????????

Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother. Trash, dont bother.

The author has a great writing style. An expert in my view. It was what I currently lack at the moment. And your story is captivating! A recommended read for me!

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