I didn't catch up yet but I see potential in this novel. I am not native so I gave 5 because I can easily understand it. The world is complex and actually, I think after reading more chapters I will try to improve my novel world hahaha. I will try to update the review when I read more chapters but it's ending of my semester so I cannot promise it now. Good luck!
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It’s perfect theme that anyone can relate to especially with the current events that’s happening. The description of the scenes are clear and it has a good plot. Just take into account the words that will be too hard for some to understand. Still, good start author ??
I'm not good at writing these reviews, but having read/reading SGS, I know that this story will be just as great! Can't wait until we get further along down the storyline and learn about this aliens background and its capabilities!
Intriguing and easy to follow plot, the story is interlaced with comedy which makes the characters all more lovable. And of course there's ramen!. Vampires and the possibility of demons as well just leaves readers hungry for more. Author- Senpai you did good in this book.
The author kills the character sends him to another place leaves him powerfull ,kills him in a ridiculous way, and the cycle repeats, if this were not enough, cliches of betrayal the only reasonable thing is that there is no harem at least as far as I read, So if you wanna waste your time and money reading this crap, good luck, I'm out.
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Decent novel, Everyone makes it out to be a masterpiece but it's really not. There are grammar problems. The development is slow for my taste.Not much character design you don't know a lot about the character.Not much of any World background. You should work on grammar and the characters a lot more if you want to improve.
É incrível o jeito que conseguiram criar uma sociedade mágica no mundo de Harry Potter sem o mundo bruxo saber.Isso trouxe um futuro muito promissor para a trama, afinal pode trazer dúvidas ao leitor deixando o enredo bem mais chamativoDesculpa escrever em português mais fiquei animadaa
I really love this kind of concept. Interesting plot creating a curiosity for readers! Would love to get more and more. Deserves a great rating!
i did not even read the first chap yet but the idea of the system seems interesting but really 100 million words pitiful i look at you with disdain i can only say one thing:pathetic!!!!!!!!!